as per previous comments

again i stand by my previous comments issssts a great story hard to understand untill the second reading good story well done

this was a great story combine alll of my intrests in one story a bit of everything thee only part i donot like is the bit about animals it would be great if you done some more stoies like this but not with dogs or other annimals well done &well written

Good nay great story, an intrigue that makes you wish to read on.

thanks

A very nice story, which managed to have some unique features, particularily in the main character.

The only thing that bothers me a little, is what did his (now her!) friends do? It seems strange after the letter they would give up altogether...

Ignoring that little niggle, it was great!

I give you credit; you had him fight  the good fight more than any other story I've read!  But then to see him finally lose.  Damn! I hate it when the evil bitches win!  

<<   Listen she said speaking fast, you don't talk to your mother like that. Now if you don't want to cooperate, I am going to drive you to Paris and leave you in front of your office at rush hour, dressed as you are.  >>

There is a point like this in almost every story of this type.  Just once I'd like the hero to say, OK, and then the story go on from that decision.

Rather good, and I surely would like to see this story continue.  You done good, so do not stop now.... Thnx.