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Mother and Daugther Club - Chris's Story
by Cathi King

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Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline on 03/04/14
Dear Ms. Cathi King,

I, too, "loved," this story. You must have a lot of love in your heart and it flowed into your text. You introduced each character with good, "word-pictures." I also liked the way the story flowed.

I can envision, through your prose, the girl-dressed boy becoming a girl-raised boy by HER mom. Un-like other stories, where males are FORCED into, "girl-hood," this little boy WANTS to be a girl. The enjoyment between Mother and Son as they, "bond," together is very heart-warming.

I'll read your longer post, later. I work two part-time jobs, as my career-days are over.

I would have given, "anything," to be raised and dressed in my sister's hand-me-downs be that never occured. (sigh)

Sisterly yours,

Missy Susan


Comment by yasmeen on 12/12/12
So adorable. Chris is sweet and utterly cute; his mother so gentle and tender, yet with a woman's wisdom to lead him at just the right place, so that he is delighted to arrive where she has always longed for him to be. The way the story unfolds is just gorgeous.

Comment by suzanne lawson on 06/07/12
I melt every time I read this story. It is so sweet the way mummy leads little Chris into girlhood, and the way Chris is so easy and happy to go along with it. Such a simple, gentle story, and yet so magical. Love, Suzanne.

Comment by sophie on 03/06/12
Such a sweet and lovely story. I love the way Chris slowly and willingly accepts his girlishness and the way mummy gently leads him into expressing his femininity. It is so nice. Please, please write some more.
Love
Sophie

Comment by Jamie on 01/11/12
The sweetest story ever. I love it so much. Please, please, please write more. You write so tenderly and prettily.

Comment by Silvia. on 05/19/11
Good work.

Comment by Jeryl on 10/29/08
Oh what a sweet story! I especially liked the line at the end about how there is a beautiful little girl in every little boy, and it is the responsibility of mothers' to bring her out. Wouldn't this be a wonderful world if all mothers believed that!

Comment by starbucks caffe on 03/14/08
A PERFECT STORY :))

Comment by Ray on 09/13/07
I just loved this story. It brought such wonderful memories of my childhood. Having my mother take me to my first ballet class as a little girl was so much fun. I got to wear a lovely pink leotard and pink tights and ballet slippers. This story reminds me of me being the little girl. I loved this story and hope you write some more about little boys being little girls. Especially about ballet.

Comment by Lissi on 06/04/07
I love this story. The sweet moments when mother carefully suggests the small feminizing steps are adorable. The story could be a lot longer and the transformation slower. Please continue writing.

Comment by Vicki Stewart. on 03/06/07
exelent very sweet heartfelt story, very well writen, give me a lot more.

Comment by Jenny on 01/25/07
A++ Please post next part soon

Comment by DAWN MARIE on 12/27/06
WHAT A CUTE STORY. DIFFERENT. I COULD READ A HUNDRED MORE LIKE THIS, GET BUSY WRITING. NO SEX, NO VIOLENCE.

Comment by Judi on 08/22/06
Hi Cathi,

Your story was very sweet and shows the loving relationship that can exist between a mother and her feminized son. It seems that she was so happy to get him in dresses and when it happened, he knew that it was right for him. Please do continue to write.


Comment by Lisa Skye on 08/20/06
A very cute story!



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