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Mother In Law
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Curioso on 11/30/17
Be careful, next husband or boyfriend of Evelyn would be another maid for her and her mother in law.

Comment by iwantmature on 01/02/08
Please finish this story!! Mske sure SHE understands she has no dick or balls, just a tiny little clitty and 2 tiny useless shriveled up little ovaries that she keeps pushed up inside her all the time!! Make her want to get fucked very nasty and using lots of nasty talk and force her to want to get pregnant!!!!

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Comment by Diane on 01/30/04
I just wish it would be this simple, I would love to have this done to me and become a maid for my wife and live as a woman. Diane in MN

Comment by Diane on 01/30/04
I just wish it would be this simple, I would love to have this done to me and become a maid for my wife and live as a woman.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/06/04
All men deserve to be punished for having being born men.  Is that the basic philosophy of your writings, Jennifer?  It would seem so.  The problem for me is that you are a really terrific writer with excellent technique and some of your stuff is still among my all-time favorites. So, I feel it's a shame that your loathing of men (or is it self-loathing) seems to run so deep that many of your stories are so nasty and manipulative that I berate myself for reading them.  But your technique is so good that I'm compelled to read the next one, so you are controlling my mind, and...wait! am I still me or a character about to be transformed in one of your next stories?

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S. (or whatever name you may choose to assign to me, Mistress)

Comment by Prudence Walker on 01/06/04
i agree with jezzi. its a bit over the top to hope the wife would give up her husband just like that, after just getting married.???

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/04/04
"beautiful story"????  Lucky girl????  Donald has been murdered, having done nothing to deserve such a fate, in fact having been helpful to his mother-in-law.  Amber is a brainwashed slave.  Nice guys finish last and no good deed goes unpunished!  

Comment by miss jean on 01/04/04
This is a beautiful story.  Lucky girl!

jean



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