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Mother May I?
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Elizabeth Rees on 08/06/05
Jennifer White can, and has, written good stories, but then she goes and writes tripe like this. Not only was it pointless, it was dumb. A magic girl's top? And she had to have been twelve at most when she got pregnant. Sigh.

Comment by Mae on 08/02/05
Amber is in her late twenties, and would have a 16 year old daughter? It would imply that she got married and pregnant somewhere around the age of 10-13 years old. While it is physically possible, it sounds unresponsible and one would assume she dropped out of school rather than finish it.

Of course, if she has a magic piece of clothing that within hours can turn her boyfriend into an imaginary version of what her daughter would have become, maybe she also can alter the age of her daugher (and Amber herself?) back and forwards as she prefers?

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/30/05
Murder most foul !!  



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