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A Mother's Lottery Win
by Julia Thomas

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Comment by Pissed off sane person on 11/14/10
Flat out child abuse is endorsed in this story as well as the comments that is because of the desires of the readers blind wish for it to happen to them. Let me tell you as a person who was repeatedly traumatized as a child there is nothing redeeming in the actions. The splintering of the mind never heals and there are not enough pills in the world to heal or numb your mind to it and time doesn't heal a damn thing. Wake up people and don't transfer your desires to an innocent child. This is a sick story as well as the complacent or out right endorsement of these horrendous actions. It's O.K. for a mature mind to make a decision for themselves for their life; but not an innocent child that should be nurtured and loved and supported when they are in no position to be able to be aware of the consequences of the actions and especially when the boy had the will to fight it all the way and maintain the wish to remain as he is and only willing to temporarily sacrifice to save his mother. As it is even if the atrocity in the story of the time beyond the 2 week period had not happened; the trauma from the actions of the "adults??" as well as the other children who victimize the child for those 2 weeks are enough to permanently break a mind. And to read some of you in your comments condone as well as one fool wishing they could have been victimized as a child shows that that person already has a broken mind to condone the victimizing of a child. Your sick assholes. I'll never come back to this site after ready this horror story and to see it actually is accepted and wished for. You are predators who I would have no problem putting down.  

Comment by Silvia.      (from Brazil) on 03/26/09
Evil and greed against a lovely boy.
Is it fair?
Silvia.

Comment by Dianna on 03/12/08
First off I am enjoying the story...but.

Butbutbutbut. I have to agree that the Mother NEEDS some retribution. Maybe someone notices what is happening and while the Mother wins the money, she looses her child.

Greed can blind anyone it seems, and that horrid Mother has destroyed any right to claim the title of 'Mother'.


Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/21/07
Yes, continue the story. This poor boy about to become a girl needs help as the transition to womanhood is completed. Please, be kind to this caring, loving son.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/25/06
I just re-read this; another well written horror story.  Andrew loves his mom, saves her from committing suicide, and she repays him by manipulating him into a sex change he doesn't want so he can continue to make money for her.  Nice guys finish last.  

Comment by Jane Hudsom on 03/27/04
Good story but I think she will kill herself in the next few years. But maybe she she will be able to live with it but as a TS i don't think so living as the wrong sex is just so very hard

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/28/03
First, the story itself is a good well written story, and I did enjoy reading it.  It certainly quickly got me involved with and in sympathy with the main character, and anger gave me a good cardiovascular workout.  Good job!

Second, the rant:   None of the adults in the story seem to care about Andrew at all.  Mom and auntie, though, are by far, the worst!  What an evil bitch "mom" (I put mom in quotes because real moms love their children - no love here, just greed.) using his love for her to manipulate him into a change he doesn't want, doesn't need, and which will psychologically scar him for life.    Andrea is going to be one screwed up involuntary young lady as love for her mom turns to hatred as she begins to realize just how much she has been betrayed and manipulated from the very beginning.  Talk about a bird in a gilded cage.  I just hope when she goes over the edge she takes mom and auntie with her.

Comment by K on 06/13/02
Thank you for taking the time to write a truly delicious story. I can only hope that you can find a little more time to bring us an equally precious ending. I do enjoy the jealous younger girls discomfort as applied to this unique boy/girl.
I only wish when I was younger that something like this were possible for me too.
Continue writing this story and  thanks for your time once again

Comment by Beatrice on 06/09/02
I like your stories, they very good and you have talent . Keep on writing.

All the best from Europe

Beatrice

Comment by Rose on 06/07/02
Great story and I think the follow on is a must.

Comment by Sapphire on 06/05/02
I liked this story a lot, but for all it's size, it seems to end in mid story....


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