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Mother's Love Doll
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Comment by jjconn on 07/07/17
he should have tried to escape for being arrested would have been the best thing!! mom & dr. denise would go to prison for child abuse,contributing to the delinquency of a minor,dr.denise would never be able to practice medicine again!!! all of mom's money put in trust take care of the boy & any therapy he needs until he's of legal age!!! Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14 SAnxhn Very informative article post.Really looking forward to read more. Comment by this is me on 09/17/12 Maybe I missed it but there is no motivation behind his mothers actions toward him. Certainly getting suspended from school for smoking isn't sufficient motivation for what he is put through. I didn't see a money motivation (except maybe implicative). The story should have included an out clause for the kid... 'mommy if you hate me so much just let me kill myself and put myself out of your misery'. If you don't understand I'll put it like this... There is no purpose for this story. Comment by Cindy Satin on 03/31/12 All your stories are fabulous, the outfits are ravishing, I would love to read of one of your creations in some fabulous ballet boots! Comment by cassandra on 09/24/07 Darlene: Comment by Sophie Marsh on 03/16/07 Darlene, Comment by paulinissima on 06/09/06 Darlene, Comment by Miss Swishbottm on 10/26/05 Oh my.....such a wonderful story Darlene. My panties are all damp from reading this delightful and oh so erotic story. it is so difficult for me to get through this story without messing my panties. I so wish i could be a big busted faggy acting sissy love doll for two domme women. I am just soooo looking foward to your next story Miss LeQueen. Comment by Sissy Pansy on 09/18/04 Darlene Honey, You write such excitng stories. It is as if you are writing about all my submissive sissy fantasies. Your writing never fails to arouse my submissive sissy slut faggy feelings and make my panties all wet. Comment by vicki on 05/16/04 cool story Comment by latexslut on 04/19/04 hi, Comment by Barbi Satin on 12/22/03 Wonderful story. I loved your choice of long kid leather gloves and a slutty leather outfit for her first fully transformed outfit. Every boy should be so lucky! Comment by Misty on 10/01/03 Dearest Darlene: Wonderful job....I want to be mommy's dolly so much now. Put me in pink curlers and make me admit what a gay little sissy pansy girlie I am in my little girlie outfit. Please let me be mommy's dolly sissy bitch. Luv Misty Comment by Alana1960 on 09/14/02 I just had to comeback and comment on what I think is your best story. I love the transformation process and how the "tapes" make our boy into a cock loving sissy. It's so funny and so arousing. Comment by Sissy Marcia Elizabeth on 07/31/02 Darlene, I just adore your stories! They never fail to arouse my big busted sissy faggy fantasies. Your stories are simply to die for!!!! Comment by Cissie-Jo on 02/18/01 I just love the way you portray the swishing and mincing, the lisping and all tyhe sissy behavior. can't wait for your next story Comment by Priscilla Gay Bouffant on 02/08/01 Wow! You really do the "posing and modeling" thing very well. Also the restrictive clothing, elaborate coiffures, jewelry, and heels to enhance the image of overstated, Vegas showgirl type, femininity. I'd love to do a collaboration with you. I have 3 stories planned for late March or early April and I will be hoping to post them at this site. Prissy. Comment by Bobby on 01/30/01 Darlene, Comment by zikan55 on 12/15/00 great story and good description of clothing |
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