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Ms. Destiny
by Heather Alexander

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Comment by Janais on 12/13/11
Your story was really ifnormtaive, thanks!

Comment by Anne on 06/24/06
This is great.  I am glad that you decided to fill things out a bit.  You have teased us with how different sex will be.  This is going to be good.  Just the right tone. Great job.

Comment by Anne on 11/20/04
This was a great premise.  Please elaborate it more and more.  For one, describe how wmonen and men really  interact and how females are physically taller and stronger and how we dress and the rest of it.

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