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Mummie's Hair
by Justincbenedict

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Comment by avor droc on 07/31/05
The story is blocked from further development by the incestuous scenario except for the most adult of sites.
The author has good blending of the erotic and its rhythm - coming in waves of description which elicits and paces the readers sexual excitement.
A youngish but mature non biological cunning "mother" can develop.I would hope that the rest of the story includes eve increasing fetish interest and equally massive control of fetish use and fetish time by "Mommie".The ultimate fetish remains the cleavage and the breasts in the bra cup
It is rare to read a story with correct pace and rhythm. This story does it fabulously.
Comment by Ami Lamida on 06/30/05
Odd, very odd.  Well written but a little juevenile, and not exactly bondage as advertised (unless you count the chastity device, which I don't).  It has hints of tittilation, but the feeling is mitigated by the absurdly unlikely character, "Mummie".

But if you enjoy stories of an incestuously abusive mother and her slightly effeminate but non-tg son, this could be the one for you.  You would find very little to fault in the story's mechanics.  The fact that it doesn't click for me is most likely a fault in me.

-Ami


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