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Mummy's Girl
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Comment by Lorelei on 05/09/15
What a precious mum for allowing her son to be "Joanne" on a mother-"daughter" trip and enjoy the glorious experience of trying on a British schoolgirl's uniform (only I would've preferred mine with kneesox for the feminine thrill of exposed thighs, complete with accompanying advantages and disadvantages). Comment by walter on 12/29/12 storia dolce e romantica a quando la seconda parte Comment by Julie K on 01/13/12 Such a sweet story. How lovely to have such an understanding mummy. I have never thought of wearing a girls school uniform. Not glamorous enough for me! Comment by Sharon on 04/19/10 Another beautiful mother daughter story.It is so lovely when a mother Comment by Aleesha on 04/19/10 Joanne was so lucky to have an understanding mother. I too enjoyed this story but I agree with the other writers that you should have finished it. Comment by Molly on 07/28/08 What happened, m'dear? Did you write yourself into a corner? Poor Joanne, her fingers must be getting a mite bit tired by now, with her hanging from the face of a cliff for all of these years. Oh well, I suppose that half a story is better than none... Comment by carla michelle on 06/15/08 uh oh this is a sticky situation. i love it. Comment by Janice Lynn Miller on 10/15/07 Very cute story, please finish it so we can see what happens to Joanne. Although I am American, I did attend an English school when we were stationed in England (Cambridge and Kettering). Your story brings back lots of memories of the uniforms required that my Sister and I wore. Comment by TiffFox on 06/08/04 Excellent story, with a great cliffhanger. Comment by vicki on 05/16/04 this story is very good Comment by TANYA on 03/16/04 PLEASE FINISH THIS, SO FAR, DELIGHTFUL STORY Comment by Brandi on 03/06/04 Amanda I just love your stories. I hope this finds you all well and good and that you may finish this storie some day. Warm regards. Brandi Comment by julie on 02/27/03 amanda a good story I feel that Im in the story it was good for his mother to understand him Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/16/02 Why Amanda, you simply have done it again. You need to continue this story. I am dying to find out what his father says and what adventures he, as Joanne, has at school. Oh, this is a marvelous story. Comment by Rich on 06/14/01 Please continue this story. PLEASE? |
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