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Murder in House
by Tanya Lynn

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Comment by Mike on 05/22/13
Like Eve and Anne said the stories are great but what happened to the rest of it???

Comment by Anne on 05/31/12
I am curious, after the big lead in for the sequel, what happened to the rest??? I mean the story was started in 2004 and now it is 2012. did you just give up??

Comment by Eve on 01/28/04
Well, Tanya Lyn, I had read Murder in Pink, but I read it again, as it had been awhile and the details were rather hazy in my mind.  I'm glad you and Dave are at it again, and this one is starting off very well - but Part 1 didn't go very far, did it?  So now I'll be waiting with bated breath for the following parts (and I hope they won't come too far apart) to see how you handle this case, quite different from the last and, hopefully, not quite as bloody.  I love your style, but you really don't have to kill so many people.  Make the bad guys suffer a little.  They don't really suffer at all when they're dead.  Only their families do.



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