Great, please keep going I really enjoyed the story.

Really keeps you glued to the tube.  Sort of long but that's not bad because the content is good.  Keep them coming and I'll keep reading.

Great Story Tayna Lynn. In the style of Mickey Spillane's Mike Hammer, Robert B Parker's Poodle Springs. Very nice job of writing. I can't wait for your next story.

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T.V. P.I. Cute concept! Keep the action rolling!!

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Dee

Dear Tanya:
Excellent writing. Well edited and well constructed
very interesting. Draws the reader in, and leaves them eager for the next episode. If the remaining part is as good as the first you have a winner.  You are doing well in building suspense. Gee, am I glad they "accidentaly" left the gun lying near in the van. This may have been a little too contived?
Enjoyingly, Jan

Once again, Tanya my girl, you are well into a marvelous tale.  You are delighting the reader with the colorful exploits.  I would love to see your main a bit less afrais to express her femininity with the male in her feamle mode though.  And I think Steve could play a larger role, perhgaps become a serious suitor even though he is aware of the duality of his friend.  Also, I am not thrilled that your main uses drugs.  But that is just me.  Keep the wheels turning and the yarns a apinning,

Misty

It's great to hear that someone's still reading Ellery Queen. "The Origin Of Evil" was always one of my favourites.

This story is off to a good start, though so far the author has so far only introduced the hero/heroine. I look forward to the rest of this story eagerly. The TG detective has been done before, but usually it's little more than an excuse for a sex/bondage fantasy (the Clinton Crayle stories for example). It will be great to see a story that concentrates on the puzzle and the characters.