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Murder in the Night
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Comment by Silvia. on 10/24/10
As always this is a very bad story! Comment by Nottingham hotels on 07/03/06 Nottingham hotels Comment by Stratford upon avon hotels on 06/26/06 Stratford upon avon hotels Comment by Orlando hotels on 06/20/06 Orlando hotels Comment by Athens hotels on 06/13/06 Athens hotels Comment by San Diego hotels on 06/13/06 San Diego hotels Comment by genhoteldir fr on 05/31/06 genhoteldir fr Comment by St Helier hotels on 05/30/06 St Helier hotels Comment by Hannover hotels on 05/29/06 Hannover hotels Comment by Budapest hotels on 05/25/06 Budapest hotels Comment by San Antonio hotels on 05/25/06 San Antonio hotels Comment by Hamburg hotels on 05/23/06 Hamburg hotels Comment by Berlin hotels on 05/23/06 Berlin hotels Comment by Cologne hotels on 05/23/06 Cologne hotels Comment by Washington hotels on 05/22/06 Washington hotels Comment by Beijing hotels on 05/17/06 Beijing hotels Comment by Palermo hotels on 05/15/06 Palermo hotels Comment by Birmingham hotels on 05/15/06 Birmingham hotels Comment by Anaheim hotels on 05/12/06 Anaheim hotels Comment by Hamburg hotels on 05/11/06 Hamburg hotels Comment by Miami hotels on 05/10/06 Miami hotels Comment by Nice hotels on 05/08/06 Nice hotels Comment by Kissimmee hotels on 05/04/06 Kissimmee hotels Comment by Buenos Aires hotels on 05/04/06 Buenos Aires hotels Comment by Miami Beach hotels on 05/03/06 Miami Beach hotels Comment by Tulsa hotels on 04/28/06 Tulsa hotels Comment by Sydney hotels on 04/28/06 Sydney hotels Comment by Oklahoma City hotels on 04/22/06 Oklahoma City hotels Comment by julie on 03/04/04 an intresting story you have a good start I think that it is also a bit bland it needs some filling out&backround Comment by Walt Disney on 12/18/02 What you've got here is not bad. It is a little bit bland though. In the future, try to expand on your good ideas. Give more details about the situations. Make the reader feel like he or she is actually there. Comment by Nellie D on 12/17/02 A fairly decent short short story that felt like it needed to be a bit longer to share a few more details. |
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