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A Murder Misstery
by Nom de Plume

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Comment by Sam on 01/24/14
Great story,i was really hoping that matt/maddy and tracy would get back together at the end..but well done,i really enjoyed it

Comment by Silvia   (from Brazil) on 01/20/10
WOW! What an amazing story!
You're a very good writer. Write more stories, don't let us waiting for much long.
Kisses and hugs.
Silvia.

Comment by Elen on 11/16/09
Wow, can you write. Great story, great storyline, and great verbiage. Just when you think you know how the story is going, off you go onto another area and another chapter. I read every story of yours after reading this one. My hats off to you.

Comment by stephen on 02/14/09
don't tell thats it? Its so great i just hope there another couple my parts. but then if there isn't it is still a great story.

Comment by Molly on 03/27/08
In part 1, the author writes:

"When we were both sated, Tracy lit up a Benson & Hedges and we shared puffs contentedly."

If I had any doubts before, they've certainly gone up in smoke: This author is definitely a Devotee of The Leaf, and a hard core addict. After reading only part 1, I believe I will need to open up my computer case to clean out the tar and nicotine deposits. This author writes a great yarn and they're getting better all of the time, but I don't want him filling my little apartment with billowing clouds of sh*tstix. :( Time to move on, I think.


Comment by misty on 03/16/08
one of the best I have ever read. I have done nothing else today! Please email me news of any updates.

Comment by ginger on 01/28/08
This was an exceptionally well crafted story.  I thoroughly enjoyed it and was sorry when it came to an end.

Comment by Kristina on 01/07/08
Wow.....this author never fails to amaze!!!

Great story. So well written. Please continue writing great stories like this. I am a massive fan!!


Comment by (AJ) Eric on 01/05/08
Not sure how "anonymous" came out as "unanimous" at the very end, but a very good read nevertheless: the kind of caper story this author does really well.

Eric


Comment by Nicole on 01/03/08
Love this story. I hope it goes on for awhile. Love the intrigue.
(Don't like waiting a month between episodes, but understand creativity does not just roll off the fingers).

Comment by Kristi Lynne Fitzpatrick on 01/02/08
   Very fun story and keeping me wondering for a while. But don't worry I haven't figured it all out yet and am concerned about Maddy now and wondering what will happen next. Thank you so much for sharing.

   Kristi


Comment by Vivien on 01/02/08
Great story!  I hope that you intend to continue with it?


                Vivien


Comment by Antonia on 12/03/07
A first class, interesting believable story.  Congratulations.  No stupid spellings , mis-spellings, or the usual American mixing of "I" with "me". 100%  Go to the top of the class.



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