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My Afternoon In Room 220
by Emma Kate

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Comment by Frieda La Scamorza on 08/30/08
Dear Emma Kate,
What an absolutely lovely piece of writing, and those words are really inadequate to describe what you made me feel while reading words and phrases that you obviously crafted not simply in your mind, but with your entire self.  To be capable of communicating your charged, visceral, sexual feelings to another living soul, your writing is truly alive.  You succeed in joining yourself to that individual who reads what you are feeling. Well done, dear Emma.
Affectionately,  Frieda Camille













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