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My Brother, My Sister
by Michele Nylons

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Comment by Kim on 05/15/12
SO PERVERTED! MICHELLE NYLONS IS THE BEST FETISHISTIC PORN I HAVE YET COME ACROSS. NICE AND INCESTUOUS TOO. THE BOY IS NICELY TRAINED BY MOM AND SIS TO WEAR SLUTTY THINGS AND OF COURSE HAVE NAUGHTY INCESTUOUSLY HOT SEX IN HOT NYLONS AND PANTYHOSE ,LONG NAILS AND GROWS TO ENJOY IT FOR EVERYONE! THE FUCK ME HIGH HEELS AND TRASHY FILTH IS GREAT LET'S HEAR MORE!

Comment by Angela E. on 08/18/07
Can't wait to read more of this.Some may think this is sick,but I loved every minute of it.

Comment by Amberlynn Kain on 12/19/05
Michelle,
Great story sis.  Wow.  I really enjoy seeing a girl gets what she wants.  Usually most tv stories are about girls being forced by women.  This was much better.  She wants to be had by men and she is.  Very sexy!

Comment by Jasmine on 08/25/04
Michele, i feel the need to clear up my review so it is not took the wrong way. when i wrote Absolutely repulsive, i meant the conduct of the brother and not the story. The story is cruel to the weaker brother but then life can be that way.
I hope that the older brother is smart enough to get away and seak justice.

Comment by jasmine on 08/20/04
Absolutely repulsive. Why on gods green earth would this victim simply go back home where is rapist also lives. just unbelievable and unfathomable. doesn’t pan out at all. i am not being rude, just upset at the conduct of this brother and the victim.

He should have gone to the police and got checked out. In several hours the brother would be in the same predicament as he was. i dearly hope that it happens, probably not. he will start loving it, or we will find him with his wrists cut holding a knife.

Still good work at a sad story, I did feel for the poor boy. I just hate his brother and think that he would have known to go to the authorities. The threat of exposure is outweighed by living in the same house with his own rapist.

Comment by Marci Manseau on 08/14/04
Loved it, loved it, loved it :)  It pressed all my lil buttons :) I only wish I'd been with you as you wrote it to thank you properly

Kisses 'n hugs,
Marci

Comment by sarah acklin on 07/20/04
A sick, sick, perverted story.  Can't wait to read more.



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