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Comment by thruholewizard on 04/15/15
I too was turned off by the last sex paragraph ,totally unnecessary and not what a man would want for his wife after paying so much to have something special .....
Comment by A Crystal reader on 06/20/08
Fantastic story. brief yet complete.
Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 04/19/03
I liked this story as it was somewhat different from the run-of-the-mill TG stories. I liked the way he chose, leaving it up to chance. On the negative side, I think some background on Dean as to why he wanted this kind of change would have been helpful. also I was turned off by the last sex paragraph; I thought it was unnecessary, although you did set it up by saying he got the whole idea from a smut magazine.
Comment by Paula on 02/06/03
A wonderful almost Fantasy Island style story what makes one wish things were possible.
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