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My Cousin Nikki
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Comment by CINDERS on 01/06/18
Definitely, see if nature takes its course to have Michelle choose Nikki. If she chooses men then convince he is Lesbian with eyes only for her. great story. Comment by juliej on 08/01/06 the story was good very easy for michael to sucomb to his wife under the in flueance what a way to go more please should have a good conclusion is you keep writing the way you are Comment by suna on 02/04/06 Why is it that the "happily married" women always kill the guy ? Didnt they actually love him at some point? If she wanted a woman she could have chosen one,, she is a beauty after all, there must be one out there somewhere. Next she will bring home a "real man" to complete the circle. These stories are always written in a vaccum where no one notices *sigh* Comment by Mandee on 06/27/05 Lovely story Donna- thank you. By all means, make her "bi". A girl needs to experience her complete womanhood by having her man. At the same time she should always maintain her love for her creator and be able to serve her sexually. Her creator might want to get a man of her own too. Ooooh sexy! Comment by Wannabe Ginger on 11/06/04 Love the work - thanks for your comment on my own story... love to hear more on hair and make-up in your next story! Comment by julie on 12/23/03 this is a very good story its quite a turnaround and how fast this was all done im suprised that michael never mad any serious objections it seemed that he wanted this to happen and did not have the guts to say so a very good story i would like to see another part where as he suddenly relised what had happend and put up a huge protest so that in the end he would have to be restrained and then end up becoming the maid a great story more please i am going to book mark this and look foreward to the next installment Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/26/03 I just re-read this story, and I stand by my earlier comments. In addition: Comment by Odette on 08/31/03 I would like Michelle to remain a lesbian...and be taken all the way...mmm Comment by cassandra on 08/10/03 Darling, Comment by Dave C on 05/11/03 I wish that I had a wonderful woman like Nikki as my love and friend but alas I do not and must dream on. But the honest truth is that I truly do love the story and sometimes dreams do come true. Like your story I love it all as\nd wish you all the best and please try to keep up the good work Take care love you do help people to keep wanting to read and learn to love life. Comment by Nancy on 02/15/03 What a wonderful story please keep up the good work! Comment by Alana1960 on 02/15/03 I enjoyed this story! Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 02/12/03 << What would you do if you were I, boys and girls? Tell me and I'll finish the story in six months time. >> Comment by Pervette on 02/12/03 Too bad those tapes don't really exist--someone could make a min |
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