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My Early Life
by Michelle C

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Comment by Sharon on 12/22/09
I loved that story,it is so lovely for a boy/girl to make love to
his mummy.I loved making love to my mummy.

Comment by Stefanie on 08/29/09
Oh dear! you seemed to have upset the little darlings.
Very naugty but I loved it.

Comment by juliej on 10/11/06
an intersting story worth reading it makes one feel so safe

Comment by shawna on 05/26/06
What  a great beginning. It makes me think that I would like to have a mommy like that. Please continue the story.

Comment by sissy priscilla valentine on 11/10/03
wonderful story! wayy tooo short! loved the femme incestual interaction and want to see more history, character developement, and a touch of domination on mommy's part  would be nice!  Read my stories on  this site; perhaps we can collaborate?

Love,

Sissy Prissy

Comment by Jodi on 05/28/03
If incest, child molesting, sexual abuse, kidporn, and criminal deviate conduct are your thing, then this story is your cup of tea. It isn't mine.

Comment by bobbi on 05/28/03
Mommy being a Daddy surprised me also.  But sweetly, and erotically
written.  so loving.  More chapters please!  Is there a real Mommy involved?  Detailed dress-up and makeup sessions, leading to sweet lovemaking, would be marv.  bobbi.

Comment by Jaclyn on 05/28/03
S O R R Y !!   Father - Son    Not  My  Bowl Of Sexual
Fun or Reading.  I Mistakenly Thought It Be  Mother -
Son  Story.  Read  First Few Paragrphs  Very Well
Written.  Started To Get Really Interesred Then The
Iceberg (The Dad Was Mommy).  I Quit Reading.

Comment by Dave on 05/27/03
I love it! More chapters, please!



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