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My Fantasy Becomes Reality
by Mwmsissy

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Comment by juliej on 08/13/06
the wifes betrayal was not nice but he deserved to suffer for his wish, a good story well worth writing more
Comment by SassySue on 12/21/03
Very erotic story, but I must agree with Sherryl S. that the betrayal by the wife was too sudden and not justified.  

That's not to say I didn't enjoy the story, because I did :).  Just my cup of tea is less humilation and cruelty.

Keep up the good writing.

SS
Comment by Sheryl S. on 12/19/03
As you know, I am a huge fan of your other stories, but this one was bit one-note and repetitive for me.  The "be careful what you wish for..." part was handled with a sledgehammer, and his wife's total betrayal and loss of respect for him in one night seemed forced and contrived to me.  What's the hurry?  

Anyway, this is all meant constructively so please don't take offense.  I just loved the adult emotions and feelings conveyed and graduality of your "Date Night" story, together with love coming from his partner dfespite the humiliation.  This was all about betrayal -- fine if you are into that, but not as much my cup of tea as your prior stuff.

Love & Huggles,
Sheryl S.
Comment by calesta on 12/19/03
Great story! I love to read about the same fantasies that I have. It would only be better when his wife puts him on hormones and a makes him a 24/7 maid.
Hugs Calesta


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