Dear Girls,

Inadvertently, I posted my comment on THIS, "First Time," story on the one that followed it, Part Two. I enjoyed reading both. It's always nicer to read stories that involve a happy family rather than one that is the submissive one. I know. To stay out of the Divorce Court, I agreeed to become my Wife's Submissive Housemaid Husband; always properly dressed. Please do write more.

Missy Susan

I would like to hear about some of your other advewntures that you have had.  Mine is similar to yours but it was my sis and her friend

To moon over (how lucky you were and we might have been), or to remember (once again what really did happen in those wonderful early days)!

Your simplicity of style and observation really does recreate the scene. I'd like to think you would risk (at least a little bit) carpal tunnel for the sake of us admirers. (There are many, many inquiring minds lurking about this website.) Thanks for the mini-adventure.

I enjoyed the story.  You are lucky to have enjoyed such sweet friendships.
If I might make a suggestion, I find stories easier to read on the screen if you have more paragraphs.  I would suggest that a paragraph should be no more than about 5 or 6 lines.  
Hugs, Annabel

I enjoy these first-time stories.  This one was one of the better ones.  I'd like to know a bit more about the slightly-malevolent girlfriend, though.  She sounds interesting.