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My Half Brother
by Derry

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Comment by shamrock on 09/21/11
hey,,,you all are sick and nut if you like this story and if it here in the USA and they will go to jail for child abuse and if you all going do it will have a good time in jail for a long time

Comment by Yoron on 05/24/08
Sadomasochism
And f*ng sick at that

Yoron.


Comment by Paul on 12/14/07
Wonderful, I am so jealous of him having all those women to look after him!!!

Comment by Sissyscott on 12/20/06
I would love to hear about his being masturbated. I think little sisies like him should be masturbated into his diapers, perhpas in front of others. Then perhaps spoon fed his cream in a high chair. You hint at this kind of thing at the end, but you never explore it here or in any of your wonderful stories. I'd really like that.



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