As with your other stories this is also well written.  Good detail and most certainly well thought out.  Well, except for the part where the body functions are in the hands of the captors.  Guess I might be too literal, but backing up urine into the kidneys would either damage them or could even be fatal.  Only the captive really knows what the body situation is and on that basis I disagree with having such a concept in the story.  I can not get the fact out of my mind that the captors have no idea of how your body functions are going.

Aside from my problem above I think it is very, very well done.  It is almost impossible to find stories of hetro CD's in strong bdsm situations and fun to find an author like you!

         Gail

Well, I'm afraid this is all for now.  It, however, is one of my deepest desired fantasis - who knows - maybe some day KINANPPERS 'R US will have a branch in the US -- they do in England.
jolly what??

luv
hiliary

an interesting fantasy but not yet finished but a bit more work will see it better a bit heavy the way to go about it but interesting

This is my Fantasy (Well Similar anyway). To be kidnapped and fully feminized against my will.  To be taken away and to serve whomever abducted me in all ways.  II so wish it.  More of this story to come i hope.  Thank you for it.

Amy (Someday)