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My Landlady's Secret
by Mark Randall

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Comment by Aleesha on 11/02/10
The premise of your story was good but it could have been a bit longer though.

Comment by patty on 04/03/10
hope you develop the story line with a true love and sex

Comment by cindy on 06/12/09
Hi, loved your story, please write more. I would love to see you add pretty aprons to your storys, thanks cindy

Comment by juliej on 10/09/06
an intresting start to this story but to fast lookforward to the next part

Comment by Tricky on 01/27/06
MMMMMmmmmm lucky young man

Comment by Chris on 11/06/02
Wonderfull!!! Please do continue!! I for one, would love to hear more of this story!!!

Comment by Joan Davis on 11/03/02
Great story and we all are looking forward to the future installments. Two TG girls living in one house.
Kisses,  Joan

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 11/03/02
A very, very arresting beginning.  DO write more.
An interesting enhancement would be the addition of more details of "her" intimate apparel.  Still, this is a great first posting.

Comment by maeve on 11/03/02
A very nice start to the story. I look forward to the sequels.

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