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My Life As Jennifer
by Donna Spencer

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Comment by JACK jOHNSON on 10/23/13
lIKED THE STORY VERY MUCH

Comment by Carol on 03/12/13
Donna:  I just read your story and I was intrigued by how you planned and carried out both the punishment of Jimmy and restructuring of his attitude toward girls.  The end result is special.  But I would wish to read more - about his young future, about possibly modeling, about his relationship with Katie - and the other girls.  Will Brenda move in with Mary and encourage Jennifer to be the best girl she can be?
   I know it has been a long time since you wrote this, but I and your fans would appreciate more.
   

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/01/10
Well here it is 9 years, almost ten, after posting. If you're still around, Donna, would it be O.K for someone else to finish the story. I get the distinct impression that you were intending a second chapter with "Jennifer" having to fill in as a model.

Comment by Briar on 08/18/09
I was enjoying this story, it is well written and covers several aspects and points of view experiencing cross dressing and same sex attraction, and it seemed as though it was going to develop into something really big and very interesting indeed.  What happened?  Did you get cold feet?  Has Real Life raised its ugly head from the primeval soup where it feeds on primitive life-forms and roared at you?  

Please do take up your tale and complete it - you cant just leave these people there like that!   If you do you are as wicked as that imaginary god/creator/person that some people still think created us semi-sentient apes and then left us lost and alone and trying to find our ways about this planet!

Briar


Comment by Bruce on 05/15/09
I taught 7th grade a very long time ago and never found a black belt in karate but i found many bullies and tamed them all(at least in my class) lol nice story and i agree still lots to finish good luck and i hope to read some more eventually

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/01/08
I really enjoyed what seemed like the first half of a story.  Where is the last half?  Did Jimmy ever dress again?  Sure seemed as though Katie and her girlfriends wouldn't have minded.

Comment by juliej on 11/22/07
i enjoyed this story very much more please

Comment by Eileen jeanne on 10/02/07
Hi Donna...I really loved this story. Very sweet and not to mushy.
However, I really don't care for cliff hangers...LOL
Will there ever be a squeal! To be honest with you, I've already begun to write one because this story can really go on and on!
Love ya, Eileen

Comment by Paul GF on 10/02/07
A very comprehensive  story.  It covers a lot of varied  aspects.  and taking into account  the different angles and  subjects covered  it is a remarkable achievement!  

The story although may be considered long  is never boring or dull  and the sentimental aspects  are good without being sickly sweet.

some may question the lesbian section  and/or the religious inclusion but like I said before this story covers many aspects.

I adore stories with a twist in the end  and this is brilliant.  

although I must agree with other requests for a sequel but it my opinion,  the story does stand by it's own merits.

One of my favourites  on storysite


Comment by rone welles on 06/10/07
 Nice start  very interesting and well written ...
there needs to be a second chapter you left us right when things are getting hot interesting and changing direction ..  

kinda like where,s the beef ?  
nice story we loved it and want you to continue ... Peace

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox   Rone   ;)


Comment by Matthew on 11/05/05
Tell me is there an concludion or is this to be continued?..Because I find this story very interesting and would like to know how it turns
out.

Comment by julie j on 05/26/05
this is a very interesting story well written & explained it was a great read you have a talent for this sort of story please write more

Comment by Gizelle on 05/14/05
This is a very interesting story, I really like it and would love to read more stories from you. However, I would love to point out your reference to Deuteronomy 24:5 and suggest that everyone should read beyond the references to gays and transvestites, for example this passage is completely ridiculous and is also an "abomination before the LORD":

When a man hath taken a wife, and married her, and it come to pass that she find no favour in his eyes, because he hath found some uncleanness in her: then let him write her a bill of divorcement, and give it in her hand, and send her out of his house. 2 And when she is departed out of his house, she may go and be another man's wife. 3 And if the latter husband hate her, and write her a bill of divorcement, and giveth it in her hand, and sendeth her out of his house; or if the latter husband die, which took her to be his wife; 4 Her former husband, which sent her away, may not take her again to be his wife, after that she is defiled; for that is abomination before the LORD:

There are many other stupid quotes from Deuteronomy, which state that if you work on Saturday, you should be put to death, etc.

Maybe you can rewrite the interaction between the mother and pastor pointing out the inconsistancies of religion.


Comment by Claire Allen on 06/10/03
I just re-read your story.  It's still one of the best!  But it's been over two years...  What happened to Jimmy and Jennifer and Katie and Jimmy's mother and Brenda?  Please?!  Very interested parties want to know!!

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 12/23/02
This story is fantastic, but it was cut off too soon. This story needs to be continued from when the trio walked off. I am very interested in finding out if Jimmy gets the nerve to tell his mother he wants to be Jennifer forever. Donna, you have to continue this story. The readers have been left hanging on the edge of their keyboards.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Michelle on 12/15/02
This is a wonderful story that begs to be continued.  Please don't leave us all wondering how Jen grows up and how she finds inner peace.

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 02/28/02
Oh!  What opportunities lie ahead for Jennifer, please don't let this sweet little girl die off into oblivion!  You must let her live! To have brought her this far and not bring her to the end would be a travesty.  Does she and Katie have a girlish encounter?  Do Sergio and his thugs rape her?  Does she play a part in making Mom and Brenda happy?

Kisses!!

Sissy Prissy

Comment by rebecca anne on 01/13/02
I do hope there is more to follow.
This story seems to be left too wide open.
You can't possible consider leaving us
"high and dry" like this...
That would be far too cruel.
Please continue.....
        Thanx becky.

Comment by Denise on 10/21/01
When?

Comment by Claire Allen on 10/03/01
Wonderfull story.  Can't wait for part 2.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 10/02/01
It seemed to end up in the air, so I was glad when I came back
here & found that it's going to be a serial.  Boys who are
petticoated & acquire a taste for the experience always make for
a good story.  (And I'll bet that happens sometimes in real life,
too.)  Looking forward to more installments.

Pervy

Comment by Catherine Hagen on 10/02/01
This was a delightful story. I can't remember a story I enjoyed more. I am really glad there was no sex in it. (well not a lot !) I liked the way things developed. I hope we hear from Jen in the future. What is going to happen when she finally confesses to her mother that she REALLY enjoys dressing as a woman.

Comment by stephanie on 10/02/01
love the story, please continue it

Comment by dillon doe on 10/02/01
v. nice story.... think jennifer should make a return though...

keep up the good work,

all the best,
Dill

Comment by Janet on 10/01/01
A very nice story.  Hope there will be more.



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