This could be a great story, however you broke it off to soon.  You need to add an additional chapter to see where it leads to.  Does Josh realize that he enjoys being a girl (it appeared so)?  Did his friend come to terms with Josh's gayness or does he learn to appreciate him as a girl?   What about mom, does she (as it appears) accept the new feminine side of her son?  These are the questions that need to answered.

i hop there is more to this story you can not leave us sitting here watting to see whot thay do next if thay macke out up in his bedroom or do thay just talk about how thay fiel.

thanks
harry

A lovely story, very well told and I look forward to Part 2.  Spelling does need looking at.

SUPER GOOD START.....GETTING HOME WITH MOM IS GETTING TO SHOW PROMISE SHE IS PROUD OF HIM/HER AND SHOULD BE WILLING TO SEE A COMPLETE TRANSFORMATION ....JOSH HAS EXCEPTED HER AND THAT SEEMS TO BE THE WAY TO GO ....DON,T KEEP US HANGING ON THE EDGE GO TO CHAPTER 2 AND THEN CHAPTER 3   PLEASE KEEP IT CLEAN AS POSSIBLE  .....  THANK YOU  THANK YOU  RONE

Hurry..Hurry..Finish this in about 12 sequels..LOL
I can see Mom will be very happy seeing her daughter
finally happy. Oh my..the homecoming dance is around
the corner..
Kisses..
Denise

Great story... down side was spelling and grammer... i would get it checked over and repost..

Also although a second part is not needed.. would be nice to see a sequel..

all my best, and keep up the good work

Ann Reader

Fine storyline that has a lot of great moments in it. I especially liked the way it ended with the 2 friends becoming more than just pals.

Diane

One of the best TG stories I have read in a long time. I feel there is no need for a second episode. Look forward to more of your stories.

Sarra,
Very good storyline visualization.. now you have to finish the story.. The characters are fairly believable.. and you almost think that Sara's mom is going to help her finish a full transition..

A really sweet, sentimental story, very well written, but marred
by careless formatting of quotes.  (Normal practice: one person
per paragraph.)  If the story had been junk, it wouldn't have
mattered, but you've started your characters (& your readers) on a
great adventure, and the story deserves better treatment than that.
And, yes, I'm looking forward to the continuation.
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--Pervy

great story, but i like to hear what is going to happen.you had me going & then left me hanging.hope you do more stories like this.

It would be interesting to read more of Sara and Josh.  Will you be writing more?

You do leave us hanging at the end there Sarra.

Starhawk