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My Life Story
by Rena Reiko Asagiri

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Comment by Sudar on 07/09/12
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Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/13/04
Dear Rena:

As with many of your sisters and brothers here, life has dealt you a very tough hand, and you display your resilience by dealing with it the best that you can for as long as you can.  You are also, obviously, a very caring individual.  I'm glad you chose to share your experiences with us here at the Storysite.  God bless you!

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S.

P.S. Your sentence and grammatical construction skills seem a tad awkward.  If you wish my assistance editing your stories prior to posting them with Crystal, please email me at sherylsteinhardt@yahoo.com, and I will be thrilled for the opportunity to help you when I can.  Otherwise, take the comments you find useful and leave the rest.  God's love is unconditional!

Comment by Rena on 01/13/04
As The Author I see the few mistakes that are in the Second part of my life story.  I leave a few words out and forgot to add n't to a word in the story I apologize and as soon as I fine the time for it I will edited and Resubmit it to read correctly!
Comment by Jennifer on 12/29/03
This might be interesting, but cut the use of !

Maybe once every three paragraphs would be acceptable.
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