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My Little Sister
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Aleesha on 01/06/10

This story was very good, I liked the way Lauren was so supportive. My only criticism is that I would have liked to have read about Sara telling her parents and developing her boobs.

Comment by missy on 01/06/10

I REALY LIKED THE STORY AND ENJOYED THE SISTERS ACT OF UNDERSTANDING IN HELPING HER BROTHER.

Comment by Sharon on 01/06/10

I loved that story,my beautiful sister helped me be the girl i wanted to be.I loved her so much.

Comment by Aleesha on 01/06/09

Thanks Jennifer for another great story. I always know that your stories will be so good.

Comment by Fancy Nancy on 04/12/07

What did she mean, "sometimes you've got to wear pants"? Darlin', REAL girls NEVER wear pants. Pants are for boys. Skirts and dresses for girls.

Comment by Elizabeth on 01/31/04

Great story!!! A real pleasure to read. Thank you.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/09/04

Dear Jennifer:

You are SO talented. Your technique is very professional, and your descriptions are vivid, and you always tell your tales well. But, when you truly get your arms around your characters and add true empathy into the equation, the results are sheer magic.

I've printed this story, punched holes, and put it in my collection of keepers. It was all very logical, true to itself, and almost inspirational. Congratulations!

Love & Hugggs,
Sheryl S.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/07/04

My dear just love the story great loved it

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/07/04

I really like this story. I enjoy stories that get my emotions involved and I really don't care whether they make me mad (a good cardiovascular workout without annoying exercise :-) or sad, or, as in this case, leave me with a warm glow. Jennifer, you are a very talented author to be able to write the range of stories you do, what a change this one was from, for example, "Mother-in-law" which made me furious and probably flushed out a number of my arteries :-) Also, the sheer volume of your work is amazing. I am envious. You go, girl!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/07/04

I really like this story. I enjoy stories that get my emotions involved and I really don't care whether they make me mad (a good cardiovascular workout without annoying exercise :-) or sad, or, as in this case, leave me with a warm glow. Jennifer, you are a very talented author to be able to write the range of stories you do, what a change this was from, for example, "Mother-in-law" which made me furious and probably flushed out a number of my arteries :-) Also, the sheer volume of your work is amazing. I am envious. You go, girl!

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