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My Mother and Me in Our Pink Plastic Salon
by Cape Crazy

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Comment by JulieChristine on 02/25/06
As someone whom has a slon/pastic fetish myself, I was really excited about the prospect of this story, but I have to say, I was left quite flat.  The progression of the story was way to fast, and alot of details were left out, and to tell you the truth, ANY story that includes the sensless killing of anyone, should NEVER be considered "Sweet and Sentimental". this story, which could have easily been a warm hearted, nice piece of fiction, turned out to be nuthing but a snuff piece with no heart.

Comment by nicola park on 02/21/06
An unusual story and quite enjoyable  apart from was there any need for them too kill one of there hairdresser's as this spoilt the story a lot.Look forward too reading part 2 where i take it male's are going too be subjected too this treatment.



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