Hi Ollie,

Sorry its such a late comment I loved all 3 parts of your story.  I wish I was that boy (in my dreams!) and I loved the whole story especially that there was a Fatherly figure in there to (an older male that was nice to him said he was pretty).  I wish there was more parts to this story.  Thanks again, Philipa x

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  Perhaps this would be a good story IF Oliver wanted a sex change, but he doesn't. What kind of mother would deliberately manipulate and embarrass her son in this way? She must be extremely sadistic, she would lose her son if she was reported to social services. I hope that he gets through puberty before hormone pills can take effect enabling him to get Hannah pregnant, that would give his mum and Alison something else to think about.

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great story, but it needs more parts like part 4 and maybe part 5 where olivers dad comes in and takes him away for the weekend or turns up early at the door and catches oliver in his nightdress or wearing his leotard or something,

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liked your story. can't wait for next installment, please make it soon.

Wait, I cnanot fathom it being so straightforward.

Ho ho, who woluda thunk it, right?

It an interesting story. Whoever I do have a few questions and observations and I apologise for the length

The fact that Ollie refers to trousers and tights as trousers and tights (as opposed to pants and pantyhose) and Ollie’s mum referring to the school uniform list when asked why he has to wear a leotard for PE, suggests to me that the story is set in England. This makes like easier for me since I’ve been through the English education system, (it was many moons ago, but I’ve been through it).

First of all I read some where that ballet tights are thicker then standard tights which would explain how both Ollie and Hannah can walk around wearing just a pair of tights and a T-shirts or a sweatshirt with out worrying about show of their under wear, not that I’ve done ballet, but the picture’s I’ve seen tend to have the women wearing black leotards over white tights.

Since he’s only 10, he’s not entered puberty, therefore he’s not started to develop into a man yet, which would explain how he can wear Hannah’s clothes. Not knowing what his mum and Alison are planning to do with him, they are going to run in to a problem in a year or two when he does. However if they give him a combination of Cyproterone or Depo-Provera and oestrogen they’ll solve that problem, Cyproterone is one of the chemicals used to chemically castrate sex offenders (might be difficult to get hold off), Depo-Provera on the other hand is a birth-control pill (will need to be injected every three months or so).

As a 10 year old he’s still in junior school, next year he’ll be going to secondary school, which will mean a new school uniform, as a boy he’s mum Since Hannah is a girl, her mum will receive a letter listing the girl’s uniform (skirt/trousers, shoes, tights/socks, blouse, blazer, etc), and as a boy, Ollie’s mum will receive a letter, which lists the school uniform as it relates to boy’s (trousers, shoes, shirt, blazer, etc). if both Hannah and Ollie “just happen” to end up going to the same school, and Ollie will probably find himself wearing the girl’s school uniform (he’s mum will probably argue that since girls get a choice of wearing a skirt or trousers and boys only get the choice of wearing trousers, it sounds like sex discrimination), or is she planning on having a word with Ollie’s teachers and getting “Olivia” sent to the same girls secondary school as Hannah?.

Of course some time before then there’s “clothes shopping with mommy” I know he went clothes shopping his mom, Hannah and her mum, but that was wearing jeans and a jumper. Since he’s got the same ear piercing as Hannah, the same orange top with stars as Hannah, the same hairstyle as Hannah, how about if the four of them when shopping again with Ollie and Hannah wear the same outfits (orange top with silver stars, denim skirt, red girl’s tights and white trainers) always assuming that 10 year old girls wear that sort of outfit.

The next few chapters should be interesting.

The ladies are feminising the boy because they have had difficulties relating to their own men folk and do not wish the boy to turn out like their own partners.
A very great depth of thought has gone into this story in every paragraph, to make it almost plausible. Even the naturally soft nature of the very young boy makes the story work better, with the eventual result in follow up stories with hormones and surgery being predictable. The feminisation in this case might eventually work reasonably well, which is not the case for 99% in real life.
Extremely well written. The number of comments written so soon say it all, there are few other stories with so many comments.

would love to see him become fully girl.  I love this type of story thanks.

Tottaly hooked on such a wonderful story.,but where are part 4 5 6 ...? Can we have loads more please.!!!

Judy and Alison, two evil and sadistic women! Judy is a weak woman.
How a mother can do something like this with her son?
Why Alison didn't turn Hanna into a boy?
Bad story, I didn't like.
Silvia.

I wish I was ollie so I could wear that niightdress and those cute white slippers! I thinkolivia should start wearing pink pyjamas and pink fuzzy slippers!

great story so farlook forward to the next parts

A cute and brilliant story, I can't wait for part 4. Hope that it goes on for ages.

The last bit was a bit of a disappointment, but only because it was too-ooo short. Other than that it was a wonderful sweet story.

I know we are all too used to the forced-fem things, but I love the stories where the character discovers her true self. We also know that in real life people rationalize and make excuses, but don't won't to allow narrators to do that.

Maybe I'm wrong, but I think that Ollie was making some decisions all along, and only grasping at straws in blaming mummy to deal with the fears of it all. I could be wrong, but I like that reading of this.  

Thank you, Ollie.

What no one has asked Ollie if he has stopped beating his wife yet?

He is being asked a string of questions that he can't answer without seeming to be asking to be feminized. Then being manipulated because he is honest, unlike ANYONE else in the story.

There are worse stories out there, but this one is up there.

Part 4 is totally sweet and wonderful to read. If only all dads could be so understanding.

A REALLY LOVELY STORY.  I WISH I COULD HAVE BEEN OLLIE.  Helena

i love the story line. It might be nice if Allison and Mummy show some interest in each other, like buying lingerie for each other and showing bras and panties off to the girls.  And of course, pretty soon Hannah is going to start growing up and showing signs of womanhood. This should lead to more interesting trips to the lingerie department and increasingly difficult decisions for Olivia.  This is a fine story that needs to be continued and expanded as life for our young sweetie gets more complex.  

I wonder if he will go against his instincts and become fully female
Great story by the way. I wish it would happen to me... ...P.S I'm 12

Cute story,please continue.

great story line enjoyed it

 Itotallie LOVE the storieline...this is sumthing I have longed for ,,,ever since I was verie young myself...tho sadlie , not to happen... THANK YOU....LOVINGLIE , Jerrie

It is a very well written story with great descriptions. However I have to ask the same question that others had asked. Why are Oliver's mother and her friend forcing him to transition. I will continue to read the new parts. I am hoping however that Oliver rebels.

Great story.  Keep the chapters coming.

Ollie, fastastic story very well paced and developed.  i can't wait to read more chapters. as a writer i have had negative comments from the same people regarding "abuse" yet they all seem to continue to read the stories they "detest" not just one chapter but all of them. when i find a story distasteful I never complete it past the distasteabe part. so please continue this great story and keep Ollie protesting his situation.

Very well paced, tantalaysing, and full of promise.  keep up the good work!

Well written and easy to read, I think Ollie really likes it and what a pleasant transition this one will be!

I had difficulty reading this story, because of Alison and Mum's manipulation and humiliation of the boy.  Jezzi Belle Stewart has it right on.  I hope that Mum and Alison are punished seriously at some point, or at the very least that Ollie rebels.

WOW !!   I just adore this story... I can only wish that I was Ollie. The story is very well written. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please, please, please keep it going. Hugs.

one of the best stories since MY SUMMER IN PANTYHOSE.

Lovely gentle pace.......  Could happen to a boy at any age....  Pity it's quite so "pre-teen" for my liking but....   I hope you carry the story through to late teens and that he/she and the lovely girlfriend become lovers.  LOL WbG xx

I have really enjoyed this story too! I like to see the slow progressions, and perhaps the mum had seen something in Ollie that Ollie didn't like to admit.

It makes me very sad to see that the next part isn't even in the queue yet though. Are you going to continue? Have you posted anywhere else? I'm really look forward to more.

I'm so glad you kept this going.  It is an interesting well-written story.  

A great addition to this series.  I love the various details, especially the visits to the hairdressers (I hope manicures/pedicures are next, as well as earrings to replace the studs) and the gradual changes to his bedroom (love the boy band and other posters).  Looking forward to what comes next.

a wonderful fast pace but lovely to read story. One can hardly wait for each of the next parts of this story to be done.

YOUR STORY IS EXCELLENT & WELL WRITTEN, I HAVE A FEELING THAT OLLIE/OLLIVA HAS BOTH GENETIC CHOICES, WHICH HAVE BEEN MADE FOR HER BY MUM & DAD - RE COMMENTS BY MEL THE HAIRDRESSER- I'M SURE WE WILL HAVE A HAPPY ENDING.
LOL RITA

Thank you for creating such a nicely written story, which I'm enjoying reading. Yes, it deals with enforcement, but it's a work of fiction - a simply fantasy that appeals to many of us. Those who don't like the genre or style, simply skip it.

You've paced it well, with some nice little details, but without allowing it to get too bogged down in detail. It's the little touches that are cute, such as the times he notices "other" girls have the same pretty socks as him.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you imagination is taking us. Please keep up the good work.

Hugs,

Debbie

This is the best story I have read on here for ages!! It's interesting how you have kept the dialog about poor oli's internal thoughts and emotions open to the reader. I secretly think he wants to be a girl though so maybe his Dad will not be able to save him from high heels or ballet pumps... looking forward to part 4.

Wonderful Story....i hope he will let his hair grow very long and stay with blond....

After part 3:
I would really like to know WHY Mom and Alison are feminizing him.

As far as we know from what's been written, Ollie had no TG tendencies, nor was he physically or mentally effeminate.  Neither was he a bad boy - in fact, his goodness is being used against him as part of what appears to be a very deliberate, well crafted plan to turn him into a girl by what seem to be two selfish, sadistic women who don't give a damn about what he's going through. It's easy for them not to care though, as everything he's going through seems to be mental. I find it unusual that Ollie is not being physically bullied.  I wonder what the two women would do if he were being physically bullied and was actually badly hurt or raped because of what they were doing.

No help from Dad, I think.  My guess is that he almost said "Olivia", not "Oliver" . I think mom has already sucked him into going along with her and Alison by using the same or similar story with him that she used on the school to make them think Ollie wants to be a girl.

With Halloween coming up, I can see matching girly costumes coming up for Hannah and Ollie, perhaps ones that require more feminization of Ollie such as matching perms.

I'd like to see him run away successfully (for awhile)  and see what Mom and Alison do.

I have read all of your stories, and I am anxious for the new one(s) to come out. You do it well enough to tell the story, without boring the reader. Good job.

A truly enjoyable story.  You are doing a good job making it plausable for a resisting boy to accept his fate.  With much anticipation I await the next chapter.

love it!!! keep it coming!

Extremely well written and interesting story. Can't wait to read continuation of it.

Great story, kind of thing i'd like to happen to me. bit harsh how this ordeal is leading him to loose friends especially his next door neighbour who he obviously looks up to. Hopefully his 'outdoor' uniform will be like my schools (small tight shorts and a polo shirt).
looking forward to next installment

I just read your wonderful story again and regretted not being able to continue on with Ollie's grand adventure.  I just love the sense of helplessness you convey, how your young hero's life is spiraling out of control and how his mixed emotions get the better of him.  

I hope Mummy and Alison continue to outsmart their naive victim and that he suffers exquisitely the joys and shame of feminine things!  There are so many ways to go with this story, from ballet ("What's the matter, Ollie? I thought you wanted to wear fairy wings and a tutu, just like Hannah?  You didn't lie again, did you?") to girl's games ("Don't be shy, Ollie.  You look great in my old dress.  It's too frilly for me, anyway.  And you can keep Raggedy Ann.  I've got plenty of other dolls if you ever want to borrow one ....").

Poor Ollie ... I can see his mummy insisting that he give it all a try, whether he likes it or not!

Keep up the good work!!!

a good start iwould like to read the next part where ollie gets even more femminised than at present

a good start iwould like to read thge next p[art where ollie gets even more femminised than at present

Great Story!

I can not wait to the next chapters. Please make it long!
Please continue as soon as you can!

Please, please continue.  I love ballet themed stories and the petticoating details are wonderful.

I can't wait to see if they put him into a tutu and some girlish frills underneath.

Sure wish there was more of this story!

Hi Again.

  Okay! This is just fiction but I think that what is being missed is the fact that this 'Fiction' appears to be acceptable behaviour. Let's face it, it isn't. Also in reality I would hope that a child like this would get help. I mean.... doesn't anyone notice? Then again we come back to the 'Fictional' aspect where all is well... sigh!

  As I said in my last rant the story is well written.

  I am afraid that the "Pink Avenger" will have to right the wrongs in her next 'Fictional' story. (Hey! That's me!) ;-)

  Danielle

It is always delightful to read an fascinating, well written story by a new author.
Ollie, please continue.

I find it interesting that commenters tend to write as if there were actual child abuse going on in stories... it almost makes me laugh. I'm all for 'getting into' a story, but wow. One should spare the real concern for reality, no?

Anyhow, I certainly don't want to start trouble, so I'll leave it at that, except to say I do hope the writer continues. I do love stories that use this kind of manipulation (fictionally, of course!).

well for the critics we have a right to express our opinion.
This is manipulation that will have a negitive impact on the child. If it continues this way, it will take away his very identity. There does seem to be little real love toward the boy.
How ever, it is a good read. i hope that the adults start to love the boy and not manipulate himself int loosing his identiy as a boy. he didnt seem to be happy

THANKS for writing this story.

I absolutely love ballet-based tales.

Hopefully, getting involved in the Dance will really help with the changes his mother and Alison want.

Sure, its manipulative, but hey, this is fiction! I really do hope you continue this.

Wonderful story!  I adore your writing style and admire how you made it sound so real.  I also enjoy the excitement and embarrassment you put your "hero" through while keeping it real.  Please, continue and remember that you have many readers waiting anxiously for your next chapter!

Regarding "child abuse" ... This is a story, nothing more, nothing less.  No children or animals were harmed in the creating of this tale, I dare say.  It is no more abuse than the drivel we watch on television is murder, rape and other types of mayhem.  If you don't like it, fine.  Turn the page and go on to something else.  

Jeez ....

an awesome story, please give us some more of it

I loved it! Well done! A simple disclaimer should silence the people who object to the use of fictional minors in fictional stories. Please give me more.

i just loved this story i think it great that his mummy wants him to be more girly,i just hope you continue it asap,pleae,thanks  p.s i hope he takes ballet also thanks pansyamy

Hi.

  I am afraid that I have to agree with J and LL. For this to happen to a young boy with leanings toward the feminine would be heaven and would make this story a delight to read. However this is a crass manipulation of a minor child and should be considered as child abuse.

  The story itself is well written.

  Oh, to Lion, I don't see any stories written by you so I guess that makes you the jerk!

  Danielle

Good story...hope you intend to finish it. Ignore the critics...at least you're trying to create something...that's far more admirable than the critical drivil written by some of these jerks who never produce anything.

Oh dear    I am not used to reading about manipulated children no matter how erotic the story....now it would have been better if this lad had fem thoughts that his mother and friend picked up on.  I used to look at lady's underwear adds when I was six and my mother saw me and just smiled  but never discouraged me. When I was 8 I had a chance at my mother's suggestion to dress like a girl for a costume party.  Yes the boys made a little fun of me but the a couple of girls in particular did not and they to this day are my friends.  I cried ( as did my mother) when I had to take off the dress but she hung it in my closet.   I hope Oliver discovers his female side on his own and becomess the woman HE wants to become

I'm sorry, but I really didn't enjoy this at all. Emotional blackmail and manipulation are distasteful enough when done to an adult, but to do that to a nine year old boy? His mother and Alison must be completely lacking consciences. When he went to school and was forced to wear a leotard and admit it was his, I gave up and stopped reading.

A brilliant start to what I hope will be a very long story! Please keep more coming!

Hi, loved the story, the emotional turmoil and the saga. Would love to hear more about what happens to this poor 'boy' next. Perhaps they have a sleepover and he has to wear girlie slippers and sleepwear... Can't wait to read Part 2. Thanks for writing such a good story, Ben