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My Playmate
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Comment by Aleesha on 01/31/10
An unusual story, great imagination and well written. Thanks. Comment by Megan on 09/09/06 Wow, I really liked the twist at the end. Kinda spooky, but I like that from time to time. Tell me, where can I find this amazing doll? Comment by eric on 02/11/05 Nightmarish Comment by Paula on 02/11/05 something you expect in The Twilight Zone. Nice twist touches in this tale Comment by Early June on 02/03/05 Ooooh, scary! I want my mommy. Another fantastic story from one who really, really can tell them. Well done. This story is pitched just right to give a eerie feeling to the reader. I wonder how many little girls are left strewn in the path of this dire doll. How many other men has she killed in her conversion from person to playmate? I'm going to sell my Barbie collection. Thanks for sharing this excellent story with us. Comment by joanna on 02/02/05 if the doll could change him and his clothes it could provide a world to sustain him/her. the denouement is unnecessarily grim. i can imagine many happier endings. Comment by Jashperous Jim on 02/02/05 Very creepy and unsettling. It felt like an episode of the twilight zone. Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 02/01/05 I'm glad I started reading your stories again, Jennifer. This one was an incredible horror story with a TG twist. Definitely top-notch! A triumph! |
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