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My Secretary
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Comment by julie j on 01/04/05
i like this story its very well written and described the manager seemed a bit miffed but thing would work out iwould like it if you decieded to put another part to this story as it seems to finish to quickley well done Comment by Clara on 11/07/02 What a nice begining to what could be a great story. You tend to get my interest up and end there. Some of your other stories have the same trend. You should keep on going with some of these stories, they're great as far as they go. Comment by tammy brown on 10/17/01 Among the most amusing and clever story variations on the old "TG/TS gets a job" theme, that I have read in years. I loved the witty writing and humor throughout, and the subplot built around Cynetta's superb competence is delightful....I'd love to meet her. Comment by Nellie D on 06/02/01 The story stars a little differently than most but twists and moves quite nicely. Cynetta is unique, her status and confidence are not as most authors portray the main character. The detail and description could be fleshed out a bit more but the writing and plotline are done well. Comment by Paula Jutras on 06/02/01 Getting pre-notice E-mail that this story was coming I was expecting a typical body swap story. This was anything than I expect and well worth time to read. |
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