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My secrets revealed
by Pete Zee

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Comment by Wannabe Ginger on 03/20/08
I really don't want to work so hard to try and read this... It may be a wonderful story but it's IMPOSSIBLE to read.  Try again, please.

Comment by Sharon on 03/17/08
Sorry I quit the story LONG before it was finished due to the run on paragraph. It became to hard to read. PLEASE redo it and resubmit it.

Thank you


Comment by dave Harper on 03/15/08
I agree with the reader above. One giant run-on paragraph is unforgivable in this day and age. If you can't figure that one out get someone who can help.

Comment by bev on 03/15/08
I wish you would have taken some time to add paragraph breaks to make this easier to read. I gave up before I got too far in because of that.



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