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My Sister Sarah
by Donna Dee

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Comment by jasmine on 05/04/15
wow. I cant believe I left a comment on this 10 years ago and it has not been continued. That is sad I guess it is one of those forgotten stories.
I am considering continuing it.
Comment by juliej on 11/03/07
brilliant story line at last revenge was found it would be great to see what happens in part 2more please
Comment by Sarah on 07/10/07
I have to agree with the comments here, this is a very interesting take on the usual 'beaten brother to docile maid' fluff.  I don't think I've yet to tackle what happens 20 years down the line when they're looking back.

I hope you return to this sooner or later.

Comment by juliej on 08/04/06
mysister Sarah what Abrilliant storyline with many wishes for revenge getting sorted out i am looking forwardto part 2 pleaseplease do it soon it will make brilliant reading imsure especially if things change with her sister comming back now that would be a great part of it and if revenge was the mainstay of this it would be great for her sister to be the maid for once brilliant more please asap
Comment by jo199 on 03/21/05
Nice story line, but part of what is exciting is in the knowing that regardless of what the hero does, he ends up in the same trap.  I'm wondering what happens next?  Does he not have the money he thinks he does?  Will his sister return after a phone call from the former head of household?

It seems to me that if the hero moves forward and assumes a different role, how do the submissives get any sense of safisfaction?  Or, is this all about dominance?  
Comment by jasmine on 01/12/05
please what ever happened to this. it was a wonderfull start.
Comment by juliej on 06/03/04
what a great start to what looks like its going to turn into a really great one revenge is sweet after 21 years of servitude i am looking forewards to the next parts especially if Sarah returns then it will get really intresting  tables to turn and revenge on his sister would make a great sequel keep up the good work
Comment by RENEE on 12/25/03
As you know I'm sure DIFFERENT STROKS FOR DIFFERENT FOLKS!!!!

I JUST LOVE stories about moms that roll/style or ? her little boys (pre teen) hair.

When I was a little boy mom rolled my sisters hair almost every day but never mine maybe that's why I LOVE THAT KIND OF STORY!!!
Comment by Karen Anne Summerfield on 12/22/03
A nice beginning to a story with godd potential. Very much, I am looking forward to reading the future installments and learn how Alice began and was trained.

Ta-ra, fer a bits,
Karen Anne


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