Thinking of what Jezzi and Dianna wrote I suppose a more propable result after 2 weeks of humiliation would be a very angry boy who would never ever agree to visit his aunt and who would never help or love his sisters. If threatened with exposure (of the prank in the school or his time in dresses) he would just say "Do it" and after further punishments and ridicule just grow more bitter. In the end he would be an outcast ... Perhaps then his sister (and aunt, mom etc.) would really feel sorry.

As a story it is well written and perhaps there was some hope with aunts promise at the end. If she is wise enough she would also see to it that the ridicule and humiliation doesn't go too far. Jezzi's outcome of the story is nicer, but given the attitude of his sister Jane - not very likely.

Can't believe the hard on I get making out I'm Tommy and taking my revenge as I pour acid over the bitches faces.

But was Jane Hilary and Susan so smug once Tommy took his revenge alone with Aunt Mary? Funny how woman break down once you destroy their look's.

Jezzi's words are to me (mostly) true. A lot of stories have someone forced into feminism and then end up liking it. But honestly, if you have nothing but negative, humiliating, hurtful experiences from something, will you honestly grow to like it? Unless you're an emotional masochist; no you won't.

This being said, I would sort of like to see a story where someone is forcibly femmed as a punishment, but that punishment goes too far and results in the person being a girl for the rest of their lives, and those who planned the forced femme regretting it deeply.

But I imagine I'm alone in my thoughts so, interesting story, but it seems...incomplete.

i stand by my previous comments

a brilliant story of revenge but i would like to read more of emillys torments during those to weeks more please

   we I guess we will never know all the story ... but the begunning is good and the end is good ... more info in the middle was needed to tell why all the girls wanted to tease him ... just one insident is not enough this had to go way back ...
good writing  and good story ...thank you ..Rone :)

a great story worth reading but i to would lioke to read more about what happens next

Wonderful story. I'd like to hear the tale of the village bully being turned into a simpering little girl.

Well done.Its nice to see a payback I would have added a tight corset,but that can be another story.this boy will get it next time,he wont last without spending time in dresses,I know it happend to me.Do add more,thanks

an excellent begining to the story cant wait for the next part hopefully you will describe the change of dresses and and underwear ie the colours and how tight they are on him and what happens when he is naughty is the punishment extended etc

keep up the great work cann't wait for part II

What a cute story!

I love all of your stories, keep up the good work!

Delightful, I'm looking forward to more!

Great story cann't wait for the next part

What, no Mac Jennifer?! :-)  I like what his Aunt said to him and I hope he decides to co-operate BUT I hope Jane realizes that if she just keeps humiliating him she will make an enemy for life.  I would like to see him apologize and cooperate, and as the weeks go by they treat him more and more normally as a girl, allowing her to grow up to her real age and showing "her" it can be fun to be a girl.  At the end of the summer (the two weeks are extended and secretly "she" doesn't mind) she is an honorary girl and loving it and she and Jane are good sisters.  Mom allows it becasue now she has the pretty daughter Jane wasn't.  

Femininity is a wonderful gift and boys and men to whom it is given should be nurtured so as to appreciate and enjoy it, not hate it.  Perhaps they will even become recruiters, helping other men to appreciate their feminine side.  That's how I like to think of myself anyway.  Hugs, Jezzi Belle Stewart

Great story. i am looking forward to the follow up stories. I loved how you perfectly captured the feeling of seeing your tomboy sister in a very girly dress. You could almost feel the evil eye she was giving her brother.

I liked this story. It had nice clothing descriptions (though I like more modern, less babyish looks). I especially enjoyed the fact that he was still obvious asa boy in girl's clothing. I would love to see more of this, especially if he wore more typical teen or pre-teen clothes. Perhaps a humiliating shopping trip to the mall?

Great story!! I liked the blackmail used ... he was bad, and would get in a lot of trouble in school unless he obeyed his sister.

I do hope you continue the story. There is so much that could be done.  Remember, even more than the clothes (though that is important!), he has two weeks to do lots of girl activities, like read magazines, learn how to write like a school girl, all sorts of stuff.

Please keep writing!!