87QvN7 Thankyou  for this post, I am a big  big fan  of this  site would like to  continue  updated.

great story would be better is continued a bit more about the office etc but most enjoyable

Bad, bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad.........................story!
Disgusting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Silvia.

finish the story please. he may of deserved the punishment, but he did not get a real choice, they really did not do it right, they should said, here lets call the pigs or sows and hand him over or you can become as much of a girl as possible and do what we say and do not complain. he would of still chosen to become a girl especially knowing he was framed by the college.  

I agree with other comments with regard to the names &wording but overall it was a great story well written and described its a pity he did not put up more of a struggle but overall a great story  you could perhaps make more of this story about what happens in the office etc

Not my kind of story.  I wish you'd labeled it properly.

I certainly don't understand why you'd change the names of all three characters. (In addition to the two women, Don becomes Brad.)  I hope you'll run a universal find-and-replace through a word processor to stick with one set of names or the other and resubmit the story.  That'd also give you the chance to provide a more accurate set of categories.  

Except for the name problems, it's reasonably well written; the unsympathetic narrator is handled quite nicely.  

the story would be good if all of a sudden the names didn't change. Could you load the story in a word processor and find the name you don't want, and substitute the name you do want?  MS word will do all occurences automatically if you set it up. and it will remove a major distraction.

Marvelous story.  Loved all the parts except couldn't imagine myself in a like situation.  But that's my problem.  I feel strongly that if one is to go that way, there is only one way to go.  And since much of the transformation is going to be irreversible, why not make the full commitment from the very start.  Thank you, again, for the fine read.

Loved it. I hpe you write more like it! I wish I had a sister like that. Sissy Riki

Looks like a good story but i just couldn't get past the part of you malmost forgeting what the name of a charater is and then rembering the reg name 20 lines latter.  thats one thing that turns me off when there charater confusion.
I can see it if its a person with multiple personalitys but it was not mentioned in this case.

Wow not at all what I thought it was going to be. I thought it was going to be a bad boy to good girl story not a Forced/Fem,Physically Forced or Blackmailed and used as a Sextoy by your Byke sister and her roommate story. Oh and soulds like office/sex slave is in his near future so his sister can have her revenge.

Thelma

agree with everyone else wonderful story.

Great story.  There is more to come, I trust.  You are very good--Sharlee

Loved it great let have a follow up to this story.Laura life in the office

uh, is the sister Becky, or Alice? Is the domme Rita or Maria? Do we have 2 sets of names? Otherwise, I like it