I liked this story especially the warnings of reality about how hard people would make it on her.  The little boys try to tear us apart and destroy who we truly are all because they are so afraid of the courage we showed the world we came out to.  

Your story defines compassion, respect and responsibility.
Nice work! Thank you

Your story defines compassion, respect and responsibility.
Nice work!

Your story defines the words 'compassion,' 'respect' and 'responsibility.'
Well done.

JANET I can not get over your great story telling on this subject they are sensitive and caring the way they should be. Please keep it up, I wish I could of told my mother but she would not of understood, even though she was a lady keep up the great writing as good as mine. I am trying to be a writer and get published and on my feet, I tired your e-mail address and it did not get through I would check it, you must be a nice person.

Great story Janet, Colleen blossoms into a woman thanks to her mom. One question though, does she get the operation & does David want her? possible Part 2 here Janet.

Well  she still has a son  ... mom just gained a daughter and a son..
seems that Janet has a stile that can draw you in and hold your mind
in a dream ... still I love this story and the outcome ...
sometimes we wish that we had parents that would love us as well ..

thank you Janet for writing this ...Rone

What a wonderful mother to help Colleen like that! How I wish my family had been so understanding and helpfull.....ahhhh a little girl can dream, can't she? <<giggle!>>

Kisses!!!!

Sissy Prissy

I like the use of the third person type story as it has been put forth by this writer. The author uses the view points of all the main characters to relate the story in a way that should give the reader some inner perspective to the story. Worth the time to read.