Dear Miss Rhonda Kay,

I woke-up early and just wanted to read a lttle bit. My M - F alarm sounds at 2:00 AM. It's now 11:37 PM.

I couldn't stop reading your beautiful story. It's a, "be careful what you wish for," story. I was enchanted. You write very well.

I do wish, that this story would happen to me but ....I'm almost 70 years. I am my Mistress/Wife's Housemaid/husband. I'm 100% submissive to whatever She wants. Although my career days are over, I still work two part-time jobs. Then, too, I'm the, "chore-girl."

Perhaps, on Thursday, I'll have some time to read your other story.

Again, I just, "loved," reading this story. Maybe,I'll home some pleasant dreamy-dreams.

Sisterly yours,

Missy Susan

P.S.: Miss Wendy Jane, I, "love," your girl's name.

RIDICULOUS, DISGUSTING!

do you think Dr. Lockhart can make me one of her "mystery girls" i think my life would be a lot happer

A lovely fantasy.

Great story; some inconsistencies.

I really enjoyed your story so much hon, and I hope to read many more in the future. I just want you to know that you have real ability with your writing, Huggs Susan

brilliant second reading

The story was interesting but there is a flaw for the readers that left comments that they wish it would happen to them.  The chance that you would say the trigger line to pick up a girl is remote. You want to "be-them" not "date-them".  So acting all macho is out of the question and you would not be told the trigger.

I would expect that eventually one man would not follow the expectation of dossil acceptance and shake off the short time conditioning. What does the doctor and her little tribe do then?

And there is no reason given for why the doctor would torture the men  this way, something in her past or a twisted mind.  Since the assisstant was altered to make he/r more submissive ... that points to a twisted mind.  Perhaps chapter two?

this is a brilliant story its a pity i does not happen in real life i would love to have been one of the unexpected boys that had been caught like that what a way to go brilliant more please

This is the best story I have ever read !! If only it could happen to me !! Wow! I wish !!

one of the best storys ive ever read

Wow. Now thats the way I want it all to happen to me. What a terrific story. Please write more.

I suppose there was nothing sharp in the entire apartment our hero could use to cut off the corset?

Great story - Please write more!

I loved it!

Ronda Kay, I found your story absolutely enjoyable. It was very well written and held my interest all the way through. You had a good plot that wasn't predictable as to why and how this happened to Terri. The only "weak part" I really found was "taking vitamins" as easily and automatically as she did. One thing most wouldn't have done was "take vitamins" on their own in this kind of situation. The reasoning wasn't there here for that. Other than that, wow lady, great writing. One of my favorite writers is "Julie O". Your story and talent here is too me in her league. Are there any other writings now or to come? Please let me know.