Another wonderful story which I hope the author will continue. A whole summer of experiences that will bring out Terri's true feminine nature. Gale gains a sister. Sherri makes sure no one at her parent's resort ever learns that this is a boy being punished. In the end it is really about a girl being born and set free.

when are you going to finsh this story

great story so far will read part 2 soon thankyou

I am sorry to see that this story with such a promising start has not been continued.  I do admire Terri's attitude; he screwed up and she's taking her punishment and not whining (although that doesn't seem top fit with his willingness to blackmail) and I do hope that the girls are out for redemption rather than just revenge.  I would like to see Terri the young lady, not Terri the slut.

this is a great begining toa brilliant story what a way to go well done i would like to see what happens when he trys to rebel this might make the story even better than it is now i am looking forewards to reading part 3 well done keep up the great work

I'd like to see more of this story - did you ever write any more of it?

Nice start for a story.  Reads pretty smooth so far. I was just able to read both chapters and they make me want to read more. There seems to be an inequity of justice, he is disciplined because of his malfeasance but his sister continues with her deceptions unchecked and unremedied; are you planning to straighten her out too? it would only be fair.

You glossed too quickly over the last days of school. Not only would his new actions draw attention, but so would the girls who saw him in the stores.  

After part 2:
I am really enjoying this so far.  A few comments:

1)  I'm confused by the changing names.  Gale started out as the sister in part 1, but Sherry is the sister in part 2, and at one point Terri is refered to as Cindy.

2)  I think the "nothing but heels" rule is unrealistic for a resort. Unless they want everyone to know Terri is a boy, he shouldn't have to dress too differently from the other female employees, and there are jobs which they would do for which heels would not only be inappropriate but dangerous as well.  I can't imagine they want him outed as that would reflect badly on the resort, as well as making worthless any lessons he might learn from all this.

3)  As stated in my previous comment, I really hope the girls are out for reformation rather than just revenge and humiliation.  So far Terri is being a good sport and taking his punishment well; that should count for something.  I also hope that "she" comes to enjoy the experience.  Also again, please no forced sex of any kind; there is way too much of that.

4)  I would have liked to read a little more about what happened at school.

5)  I'm looking forward to part 3

can hardly wait for the job to start after reading part 2.

Normaly I'm not a fan of the bad boy to good girl stories but this one is wonderful. Quick write more. I can't wait.

Great beginning!  I agree with Misty.  I like the fact that Terri is accepting his punishment and not whinning and crying about it.  There are too many sissy stories on the net already.  I hope this will be a tale of reformation and redemption rather than just humiliation for revenge sake. I hope Terri decides that she will make it up to Sherry and her sister by being the best girl she can be.  And, while Terri has to learn to interact with boys as a girl, please don't go the slut sexfest route; Gale, I hope, while really pissed at Terri,loves him, and wants to turn him into a very feminine girl, but a young lady, to be eventually her sister.

Great idea - very realistic scenario - and the degree of humiliation is well done.  My only criticism is that the pace is just a tad too quick.
I am really looking forward to the story of the summer and how the girls make Terri's life a misery.  What an opportunity and how richly is the punishment deserved.
Hugs, Annabel

    You've a fantastic start on a great theme.  I like the way you have Teri accepting his punishment and that there is not a great amout of unnecessary humilitions being heaped upon her.  Stay with the no sex or implied sex as I know from experiend that work better than lengthy and involved sex scenes.  Let us see more of this well done story.

    Misty

good start to the story. look forward to reading the next well written part to it

Love this story.  You write very well.   I am eagerly awaiting for more of this great plot line--Sharlee