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My Transition
by Mwmsissy

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Comment by ashley on 12/11/13
Whoa there. Great story here and really getting into it.

Comment by Dave on 12/06/03
This was one of the most wonderful and erotic stories I've ever read. I particularly loved the character of Ruby. How about a part 2?

Comment by linzi_lovsitt on 11/26/03
After the first swingers party  I dont think I would have went back or at least id have tried a couple of affairs before I went good story all samexxx

Comment by Chris on 11/09/03
You also wrote this story under the name: Four-play....why the name change?  The story is good, just curious why you'd resubmit it under different names?

Comment by Shawneee on 10/27/03
I read your Transition story. It's too bad you had
such a rough experience in the swinging scene. I guess
these things happen occasionally. From reading how
things went sour with the black bitch right off the
start maybe you should've swallowed your pride and
left her for another instead. Now by the looks of your
arrangement you either have to enjoy it if you want to
stay with your wife of many years. After all you did
encourage her into the swinging in the first place. Or
if having the BIG black dick up your ass isn't really
want. I'd suggest leaving your wife and her well hung
lover, after all she obviously doesn't really love you
anymore. Di-spite her telling you otherwise, NO wife
with ANY love for her husband would subject him to
such abuse. Don't be a schmuck and dump the bitch, get
a NEW life and learn from your mistakes. After all
life is short enough and if you're not enjoying your
current situation, move on. There are plenty of
wonderful women out there that will love and
appreciate you as a MAN, and not some niggers bitch.



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