Crystal's Story Site
·
Return to Story Index Page
·
Add your Comments
·
Story Comments by Readers
My Transition
Latest comments are shown at top of page. |
Comment by ashley on 12/11/13
Whoa there. Great story here and really getting into it. Comment by Dave on 12/06/03 This was one of the most wonderful and erotic stories I've ever read. I particularly loved the character of Ruby. How about a part 2? Comment by linzi_lovsitt on 11/26/03 After the first swingers party I dont think I would have went back or at least id have tried a couple of affairs before I went good story all samexxx Comment by Chris on 11/09/03 You also wrote this story under the name: Four-play....why the name change? The story is good, just curious why you'd resubmit it under different names? Comment by Shawneee on 10/27/03 I read your Transition story. It's too bad you had |
Add your Comments |
The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated. Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated. I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory. Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also. There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box. Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs. It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional. Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite. |
Please report any problems to Crystal