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Comment by mia pron khalifa on 12/20/18
VwqNrJ Souls in the Waves Great Morning, I just stopped in to go to your website and assumed I would say I enjoyed myself. Comment by Silvia. on 10/28/09 Badddddddddd ! Comment by juliej on 12/27/07 as per previous comments Comment by julie j on 10/01/04 i liked this story a lot it is straight forward &factual as stated in the begining a very good read & the writer is to be complimented on this story well done well written More please Comment by Koz on 09/26/03 Loved this story, clearly someone with an interesting mind, and better still you're from good old Britain too! It was erotic throughout without any hint of sexual encounter, that is not easy to do. Keep posting, or email me! Comment by solon on 05/23/03 interesting story of bad girl....very smoothly done. keep writing. Comment by Ami Lamida on 05/23/03 First, the good: The structure and mechanics of your writing were very good. No major spelling or grammer problems (though a few minor ones that I was able to overlook). I personally enjoyed the clothing and bondage descriptions. The story was erotic to me. |
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