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These pictures are just too wofudrnel!  Of course, you couldn't have two better looking or more precious subjects (or three, including Mr. Hansel).  There's not a single bad picture in the whole bunch.  I think my favorites are the beach pictures, since that is where the engagement took place and where they will begin their new life together.  Cheers to the bride and groom and these beautiful shots!  Love.

Well, actually, a lot of what you write is not quite true !... well, okay, it does not matter:DD

Scribbler, give me a student's record-book!))))

Yet, much is unclear. Could you describe in more details!....

Internet is written with the capital letter in a sentence, by the way. And hundredths are written not with a point but with a comma. This is according to the standard. And actually everything is very good..!!

Somewhere in the Internet I have already read almost the same selection of information, but anyway thanks!!....

e2mhnl Interesting. We are waiting for new messages on the same topic!!....

Uhm, a minor annoyance, but a growing irritation:

"your" = 2nd person possessive: "Your breasts and my breasts."

"you're" = contraction of "you are": "First, you're passable."

At least you're consistent, but it is becoming increasingly annoying to keep running into stuff like "First, your passable."

I agree with the others, that this is a very good first effort. However, I did not like Jackie, the main character's mentor and eventual wife. The author paints her as a first class manipulator, who often lies by omission. In real life, people often justify this sort of falsehood by saying "I didn't lie, I just didn't tell you everything!" (When someone selectively edits the truth to create a false impression, that is lying.) That never comes up in this story, because the main character never calls Jackie on any of it.

Toward the end of the story, Jackie makes the unilateral decision to discontinue birth control, and does not announce that fact until she is pregnant. The main character responds, not with outrage for being deliberately left "out of the loop," but by telling her how much s/he loves her. At that point, there is either too much disbelief for me to suspend, or I have to decide that the main character is turning into a doormat, and that the story is taking on femdom overtones. The situation quickly escalates when Jackie lies outright about the next shot she gives the main character, who has by now accepted that Jackie will have her way and that s/he has no say in any of it. We find his initial assessment that she is "out of my league" validated, and that she wants him more for a toy and a pet than a full partner to love and respect.

Fortunately, this is not a theme that runs through all of the author's stories. In 'A Year In My Life', the main character is much stronger, and the relationship between him and his girlfriend, who later becomes his wife, is much more balanced and loving. That story made me cry for the love and acceptance with which it is filled, while this one just made me angry.

Mike writes: "It's wonderful to get away from our ugly,violent,Misogynist world with reading like this............."

One only need contemplate the prevalence and popularity of forced fem stories on the TG repositories for a few moments to realize that there is plenty of ugly and violent misandry out there in the world, as well. Forced fem stories also make the point that the most destructive forms of violence are not necessarily physical...

Ah! Teddie:

  I must admit to a lot of apprehension prior yo reading your story. There are so many thinly veiled, hate driven, so very sad forced fem stories out there that I almost didn't give you the benifit of the doubt.

  I am sooooooo Glad that I did. You have a fresh, kind, untainted, wonderful sense of what is that I cried! You have the ability to snatch the readers emotions and play them like a virtuoso! Thankyou for playing me!

  I feel refreshed that there are real people out there who really care! I can't say enough good about you. Thank you for being here.

May the Goddess Bless and Keep You!

Danielle

Thank you very much for another great Story Teddie. It fills the imagination with the tweak of hope that anything is possible. Your ability to create such believable sensitive males and the love you give your characters is simply wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your incredible tales. Please, don't ever stop writing! You have a rare gift. Use it to help other's and give them the same hope you have given me.

Sephrena Miller

i so loved your story that i showed Mistress.  She ordered me to write my story as a she-male.  Thank you for your inspiration.  Your story is so sweet and inspiring for those who are really feminine inside.  Love, alie

Teddie dear -- I loved this story.   So well written and told as if it all is possible.  I would dearly love to have a transformation like you've described, including the ability to carry the baby.  Thank you so much!

Teddie  darling,Just had to tell you how   I loved  the story so much. So well wrtiien and  had  so many inner feelings all the way through.  Was  not violent, but beautiful in fulfilling the true feminine  feelings that we girl  dream and adore so.  I can relate  so to bing  a mother in a way that would be so right.  Keep up the beautiful  work.
Love  
Joan

Loved this story. Very well written.
Most of us dream of something like this happening to us. Perhaps someday......

Really loved your story. You wrote very well and expressed intimate
moments of woman transition so beautifully and touchingly.
As I read the narration, I truly identified with the role of
lactating mother and how I craved that!
Please keep more of these flowing from your heart and pen.
Love you.

Now This is what I call a True LOVE story! It's wonderful to get away from our ugly,violent,Misogynist world with reading like this.............

   ... just one thing, ... please tell me that what you wrote, is true, that that technology is available ....

Loved the story. Well written and no ugly, violent sex. Got any more?

Very well written - the premis presented is one I beleive mny of us wish were true.

Well, I just loved this story.
I found it extremely readable.
A real story, which stuck to the main thread throughout and progressed at just the right speed.
I do hope that you'll write some more, personally I'd prefer a new story rather than a part 2 -just my 2 cents!

Thanks for sharing it with us!

A very enjoyable story. A great effort for your first try.
Cathy (Tom) is very Lucky.

Very nice, very readable story.  If this is really your first attempt, I can't wait to read your coming stories.  Story idea/sequel:  A story about Tom growing up in an extended family of females and shemales.  How will Jackie and Cathy (and by extension, the rest) raise him?  If he spends his first 3 years exclusively with them, his cultural conditioning will be feminine.  Will they provide him with masculine role models?  If they do and his masculinity gets out of hand as he grows oldwer, will they feminize him?  What if at 18 he wants to take the "family tradition" one step further and go for SRS?  I think Tom's story would be really interesting