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My Wife's Biggest Mistake
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Comment by Raychelle on 07/06/05
I agree with the chopiness........a little more work and it would be a great story. as for the total? Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/05/05 I liked this story, but reading it was like trying to put together a jigsaw puzzle only to find that the box of pieces contains the pieces from two different but similar puzzles mixed. For example, the timing in this story seems way out of whack. At the time David meets Rebekka... Comment by Celia on 07/04/05 This was a really, really great story! I thought the transformation was a little too deas ex machina, but otherwise this was a top notch story in terms of originality, language, eroticisim, and fun. I loved the French Maid scene! Again, top marks. Comment by Diane on 07/04/05 This was an interesting story. Although, there were too many holes, too much left out. Paragraph structure would also have been nice to see. Shorter paragraphs make it easier to read and follow. Danielle, you have interesting ideas. A little review of grammer, sentence, and paragraph structure would help you a lot. |
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