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Nathaniel
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 05/01/13
Great story tonight Janet.  I have often wondered how could so many of moms bc pills go unaccounted for?  It takes a lot to make a difference and the pills are in a blister pack showing the date next to each pill.  It was nice to see Cathy's transition was a smooth one, many aren't so lucky...whoops, I keep forgetting this is a story, not an autobiography!

Comment by Diane Morrill on 06/26/09
The story is a perfect example of the power and energy of "desperation following hesitation," therefore making the story quite reasonable and logical. Given the opportunity, OF COURSE Nate would take the pills - he HAD to find out what they'd do to him in order to quiet the PAIN of his desperation. My viscerals detected not a flaw.
A magnificent job!!!

Comment by lee lee on 06/29/08
I read all these stories that relate to my interests in transgendering   I especially like stories involving mothers and hormones and develp around a wholesome family..   This story filled  all my expectations except for a couple of questionos..how did this yound man get away with taking his mom's hormones withour her missinig them?  And  I still can't figure our the quick operation to hide or transform the penis and scotum..I have read  about it in other stories too and can't figure it out...but I loved the story.  My mom started dressing me when I was 8   She did this for her own gratification not realizing it would become a necessary part of my life long after she was gone...and I can relate to the misuse of hormones and the lasting effect they have ...would love to read more of what you write   Again thank you!

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/21/07
Well, Janet, Nathaniel becomes Catherine because he abuses his mothers pills. Uncle Bil finally accepts the change after they come to terms with her deceit. Her best friend accepts her to. then she helps other trans gendered boys. Janet, I hope you had the help you needed. This story again tells of the burdens of the trans gendered.

Comment by juliej on 07/16/07
what a way to go what cani say but wow Wow well done

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/13/06
WOW


Thanks

Rone


Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/17/01
As this story unfolds it's clear that the story is being related by Nate, a young boy and his mother. The tale starts off with both characters of the story describing Nate's coming to terms with his apparent misuse of his mothers hormone pills. Janet, has given yet another display of her talents with this story by letting the readers see how a story can be told in a totally different format than is normally used. I'm sure it has been used, but Janet has taken it to another plane. The story shows what many of us can only dream about. We all wish we had a parent(s) who would be as understanding and helpful with what the story deals with. I haven't had the opportunity to read all of Janet's stories, but I know by those, that I have read to this point, that her other stories should be just as good, in format, composition and grammar as this one is. If that is the case, I'll be a life long fan forever. There are many authors who can tell a great story, but Janet in my humble opinion is at the pinicale of the group with a few more of the authors on this site.



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