"Joe sat at the dressing table for twenty minutes looking at nothing. For him, it was the same old story. The joy and excitement of the preparation, the sensuous feel of the nylons and panties on his smooth skin. The erotic joy of the scents and feel of the cosmetic creams, lotions and sticks as they slid across his face. It was all shattered by one careless glance in the mirror. You see, the person staring back at Joe was the person he was and not who he wanted to be."

I've read your story's first chapter again, Marti - it's as wonderful as ever!  Thank you.  How sensitive your writing is - how truly "Natural" are the emotions in the quote I've chosen.   Haven't we all felt that misery after the elation of our preparations.  

Thankfully your story gets happier from that point.  I think I love you Marti B!!!

Marti, thanks so much for this story.  I would swear you peeked into my mind and created Joe/Sue.  There is so much about him/her that I hold in common.  Joe's struggle to find balance and blend with his inner woman was masterfully developed and parallels my journey very closely.  Even Karen parallels my wife's journey into not just accepting but celebrating my femininity.  Again, thank you!
Angie

jZVehv Very informative article post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Cool.

Sometimes I also see something like this, but earlier I didn't pay much attention to this!....

Sent the first post, but it wasn't published. I am writing the second. It's me, the African tourist..

Not bad post, but a lot of extra !!....

As usual, the webmaster posted correctly..!!

9WDcXI Edidn't think about that. I'll tell my mother, she won't believe it..!

Good story, I liked!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Marti,  you've got a certain style that hits my buttons - I love the themes and the detail you use.......  Indulges my hair fetsih beautifully.    Could you write another chapter... maybe it's been too long,  but do try!  Love Ginger

Marti!  I am impressed.  Insightful, engaging, uplifting, creative, and really sweet too.  I too test in the category of androgyny and that was very interesting for me. But more importantly, I feel that your whole reasoned approach to conflict and resolution is far more realistic than most any story I have read.  What a strong love with such dedication and devotion.  Admiration abounds for Karen and her ability to be flexible and loving toward her dear Joe/Sue.  Her initiation of the whole counseling discovery process surely puts her in the TG fiction hall of fame.  I think the realistic guilt and how to address that is helpful too for those who struggle with that.  God knows I have in the past.  This story could be for some or many much more than a story but part of an education to understand themselves. I am sure you intended that.  Above all else I really enjoyed your tale.  Thank you so very much.

Hugs,

Kristi  

Just to say very pleased that you have got back to this story.  It is a very well written saga and has me tingling in all the right places.  I feel like I genuinely want Janet/ Sue/Joe to get back with Karen and work things out - it will also be interesting to find out how Sue feels about kissing a man (and especially her brother - not sure about that) - will/won't she tell Karen - how will he cope with permed hair at work, will she and he co-exist, what role will Karen play - hope to hear the conclusion soon...

..and a personal plea, keep to the CD/TV and stay away from the magic, cos you are one of my favourites and I wouldn't want to lose you - all in a puff of smoke!

Have loads of fun

Tina

grate story but need more how about part 4

A story that made one cry and feel warm inside at the same time. I love the movie you mentioned near the end. (SIMPLY IRRISIBLE) and I love the closness mentioned at the end of the story.

Hi Marti

A wonderful story that brought a tear to my eye but also made me smile. You really brought the character of Joe to life; his pain, his desires and his love for Karen. But along with this we saw how all this affected his wife which is so often missed in stories.

The ending was perfect. Maybe only a dream for some...but oh what a dream:o)

More stories please.

Thankyou

Becky

Dear Marti
Probably one ot the most indepth stories I've read about a crossdresser.The part about the mothers note had tears form in my eyes. I would hate to think any mother could be so vindictive towards her own child. I hope that part was fabricated and not an experience you had or anybody else had. One of the best stories I have read, about understanding a CD pysche.
Love and Warmth
Pickles

I really liked this story and wish there will be add'l parts.
I enjoyed the sensitive nature and the concept Marti has that
there doesn't have to be magic.  This seemed real and I could
relate in that the transformation is key (for me).  I enjoyed
the idea of being about to talk realistically with a loved one
and be accepted.  More please!!

An excellent story so far.....
I can certainly relate to the male character.  Likely many of us can. Cant wait for the next installment.

The first part of an interesting story. Good developement and writing. It sounds like the inner conflict that all of us endure whether TG/TV or not.

This looks like it's going to be another nice story by Marti.  I like the way the characters are unfolding, the plot is developing nicely and I'm really looking forward to future installments.

Very moving story, with psychological depth and honesty. Thank you!