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The Neighbour
by Cleos Slut

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Comment by suba me on 10/26/19
HJRmsO Relaxing on the beach with hubby. Home in both cities where my son as live.

Comment by smashing top seo on 10/25/13
yEccP8 Looking forward to reading more. Great article post.Really thank you! Really Great.

Comment by the best seo service on 09/06/13
H8VX3w I really like and appreciate your article post.Really looking forward to read more. Cool.

Comment by juliej on 06/15/08
great story more please

Comment by Max(ine) on 02/06/08
Wonderful story, i loved it. Not too long not too short and to the point, very sexy. Keep up the great work. ;)

Comment by Pammy on 01/25/08
Cleo I am a big fan and have read the earlier versions of these 2 on fictionmania.  These are great stories, but as Lee Lee and B J Swallows both beg, PLEASE finish The Neighbor, yes, I'm a Yank and a Suck!! lol.

Be well and take care.

xoxo Pammy


Comment by Jon on 01/25/08
Loved the quick and spontaneous style of the story. There was no hesitation in the exploration of each characters lust. I like that. It gives it a great sense of fantasy, but your characters weren't fantastic. They were regular people who just had to have hot hot sex. I'm looking forward to reading some more about their lustful lives.

Comment by k2 on 01/22/08
is this a re write of a story from another site? I know I have read both of these before.

Comment by Barbra Jean Swallows on 01/21/08
I loved your story. It ended to soon. Please add more. Thanx.

Comment by Lee lee on 01/19/08
Fun story but a little far fetched of course.  The potions and drinks and constant hard ons and cummings took away from the cute reality of the story. All of us want that girl next door!  Now I hope you will get this young man into the initiation get him to start some sweet and gentle cocksucking   put him willingly on a massive hormome schedule and turn him into the  little whore he was meant to be...your story telling kept my interest but I felt it was a tad too sophmoric for my taste...but, hey I read it and want to read more.



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