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Comment by Laurie on 03/08/14
I get it!!, Its another very good story.. I wish you would go back to writing,, You are very good at it!! Comment by Silvia. on 06/17/12 Sickly, disgusting, ridiculous, horrible, revolting, etc... Comment by Trying to understand on 02/06/09 revolting! Unplesant! So much so, I quit reading. It is plain to see that the author hates men and boys. No value to this story at all and all those who think it was good.....should rethink their decision. Of course, if you are of that unplesant nature of hating men and boys and taking advantage of a small child then I feel sorry for you too! This does not help me to understand the transgendered, cross-dressing society at all. It just shows perversion!!!!! Comment by Trying to understand on 02/06/09 revolting! Unplesant! So much so, I quit reading. It is plain to see that the author hates men and boys. No value to this story at all and all those who think it was good.....should rethink their decision. Of course, if you are of that unplesant nature of hating men and boys and taking advantage of a small child this I feel sorry for you too! This does not help me to understand the transgendered, cross-dressing society at all. It just shows perversion!!!!! Comment by joanne50 on 12/24/05 Charlotte Comment by Angel O'Hare on 11/12/04 Another winner by the wonderful author Sarah Bayen! Congratulations Sweetie on another great story! Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 08/05/04 A well balanced story. I really loved the bits about John/Charlotte shooting "love me" arrows with his/her eyes. And the ending hinted nicely about teenage love - perhaps lesbian love but perhaps not... Comment by Jimmy on 08/04/04 Very well done. With a delightful ending. Comment by Pippa K. on 07/30/04 Oooo... Chills down the spine... Let me agree with Ms. Davies: crafty, indeed! One of my favorite H.P. Lovecraft stories was from the point of view of a monster, who couldn't quite grasp its situation, nor could we until the end, when the first-person narrator was shocked to discover its own nature. Sarah Bayen has written a tale both more subtle and more complex, but with an even bigger payoff imho. Great fun! Comment by Samanta Michelle Davies on 07/30/04 Sarah, Comment by jami on 07/29/04 You did it again, girl! Another truly outstanding story. I can't wait for your next one. Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/28/04 Loved it.Sweet boy feminine yet with under it all a inner strength. Macho dont always win the girls heart Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 07/27/04 Dear Sarah: Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/27/04 after part 6 Comment by Annabel on 07/24/04 (After part 5) Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/20/04 After part 4 Comment by Pippa K. on 07/15/04 It's really fun to see a story told from a less common angle. In this case, the first person narrator is the nominally malevolent character in our little transformation story. Makes it interesting, doesn't it? And, there's lots of conflict, tension, and untold backstories to our little players, too. Can't wait to see it develop! This IS fun! Comment by fregen on 07/15/04 It's always a pleasure to read Sarah's well crafted stories. Looks like another great series. Thanks, Sarah! Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/13/04 Looks like another good one! Congrats, Sarah Comment by Samantha Michelle on 07/13/04 Well Sarah, (To borrow a quote) "This is another fine mess you have got me into" said Charlotte/John... |
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