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Never Tease Girls if You're Outnumbered
by Jennifer

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Comment by thisisme on 06/29/13
All of these stories are short on provocation. The kid says one thing and he is accosted by 10 girls and everyone says it serves him right? Then the kid inexorably becomes her best friend? Most of the stories I see categorized under bad boy to good girl should be categorized crazy bitch!

Comment by Dianna on 03/05/08
I felt that things went too far, but then again I've never agreed with public humiliation. As the youngest of five children (and often the victim to similar plans) I can honestly say that I have nothing but contempt for my elder siblings.

The fact that I was born a girl did little to soften the blow.


Comment by juliej on 12/05/07
as per my previous comments

Comment by juliej on 07/30/07
a brilliant story the girls could have gone further but didnot brilliant this is my3 reading of this story

Comment by Beardy on 04/24/06
Definitely some deja-vous going on there.
It seems like this is a very dangerous town for a boy to live in, a bit like Midsommer, only not as deadly!

Comment by julie j on 06/25/05
a wise remark this is my second reading of this story but well worth it well done

Comment by Dorothy on 07/15/03
I really love this story!Stripped and dressed up by a gang of girls,this is great!Keep up the good work Jennifer!

Comment by julie on 04/28/03
an excellent story well written I wish that that happened to me years ago brilliant story well written

Comment by Vanessa on 04/17/03
This has all the elements which make "petticoat punishment" stories work for me. A believable story line, a very reluctant victim (no hidden TV tendencies),no physical violence or abuse, a generous helping of very chastening public humiliation, and the punishment inflicted by women or girls you might encounter in real life, rather than some fantasy bitch-goddess. Very enjoyable, thank you Jennifer.

Comment by Lesley on 04/17/03
A very good story. The whole story line is very easy to believe, and does not delve into the realms of obvious fantasy, thus really retaining the reader's interest. There are a number of well-documented cases where similar retribution has been exacted by fellow-pupils, siblings or work colleagues, so the story is very credible. I always enjoy a story far more when you don't have to suspend belief to keep reading!  

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 04/10/03
I really like how your stories have evolved, becoming more and more realistic.  I didn't have to suspend disbelief for this one at all, as I could imagine it really happening.  I liked the way the hero(ine) didn't whine or complain, but took his medicine "like a man" :-)  And I liked the fact that he and his sis became friends, which would not have been the case, I think, had the punishment been excessive.
If I'd have been sis, though, I'd have put a touch of makeup on "her".

Comment by Amanda Walker on 04/10/03
Cute! Loved it.

Comment by Denise Em on 04/10/03
Another very lovely story.  

There were some fragments of "de ja vue" (all over again) from "One Good Turn", but still, a pleasant read.

Deni



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