Good work.
Silvia

Nice, short, tale. Written clearly and holds interest. The transformation, though quick and short on details, was more than adequately described to fit the story. How would Chloe know what her duties were so soon after transformation?  It doesn't ruin the story but it does cause interruption to the reader's logic.  Even handing Chloe a list would suffice, or merely telling her to follow the other attendant. Keep up the good work.

Wonderful Story.  Please continue!

Many Hugs,
Nancy B

Hi

I just finished reading your Air Hostess story - for the 3rd time!!  I sense from the story that you may be a transgendered person - and understand the desires that we all have.  I don't know how many times I have had a similar desire - I've lost track a long time ago.  The thought of being turned into a girl like this, so suddenly, is simply exhillarating.  I was wishing it was me each time I read it.  About the only thing you didn't have Chloe do was have her period, or perhaps get married and have a baby, but that of course could happen in another installment.  That aside, what you did write was nice, short, to the point.  I wish I had thought it up myself.  So keep up the good work.  You seem to have a good immagination.

Karen Michelle