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The New Assignment
by Patricia Pendragon

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Comment by Ravi on 03/11/14
Hi Patricia.
Nice story, I liked.

Comment by eric on 09/06/10
i must say i wish i was him and have all that done to me

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 02/05/10
Hi Patricia.
Nice story, I liked.
Silvia.

Comment by Aleesha on 01/04/10
Quite a different type of story but well written. I guess every pre-op male/female would prefer this type of sex change, I know I would but could it be possible to become a younger woman.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/12/01
another super story that remeind me of a JENNY NORTH caption image if I recall the right site.

Comment by Connie Grant on 01/04/01
It’s nice to have your mother and friends sensitive to your needs, even before you fully understand them yourself.  Working in a future biological lab with helpful co-workers…

Whoops, better read it for yourself.

This is a well-crafted science fiction story set in the near future.  It is about nice people behaving civilly to one another; I loved it, and encourage Patricia to continue her writing.

Comment by Nellie D on 01/04/01
A nice story with a sci-fi base about a young man at a research lab. It is interesting to read how the author views how the change happens.
Good story line with good descriptions and characters.



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