I enjoyed reading your story very much.  I particularly loved the fact that you focussed on the way Jamie was dealing with the whole thing.
The total lack of sexual innuendo was like a breath of fresh air.

Thank you, and I hope you are continuing to write.

Not bad at all fellas and glaals. Thanks.

Hi.
You're great.
I loved your story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Thanks for a neat story; keep writing.

a REALLY NICE PENNED STORY. gREAT VOCABULARY AND IMAGERY. WELL DONE , AND KEEP THEM ACOMING. ANY FOLLOW UP ON THIS ONE AS HE/SHE VENTURES INTO LATER LIFE?

gREAT

If this where only possible!  Even now, in my 50's,I wish for that bug bite-----

I've read all of the other comments and agree with most of them. Please do more, this story was so very good and most of all so clean and innocent.

I just read your lovely story. I was really drawn into the whole situation by Jamie. She/he turned out it seems to be a very sweet girl and if another story ever comes, I am sure a wonderful woman.
Keep writing, you are very talented and good at it.
Hugs, Jan  

 Well it has been a long time and there is no more added to this story ... there is not another story ... you are a good writer with talent and compassion ..I hope we are blessed with some more of your
good work ....thank you Rone

A very good short story. Amanda Stone shows a lot of potential as a writer and I hope to read more by her in the future.

You are too good a writer to stop at this great story.  Write some more!!

A very well written story, I am glad to see someone not resort to sex and sexual fantasies to make the story interesting.  I think the take on a wasp like bug transmitting the chemicals to cause the transformation was  wonderfully kept until the end.  I'd like to read more stories by this author

Very well written story. I actually could relate to Jamie in the fact that if the same thing happened to me, I'd hide the changes as much, and as long, as possible so that they'd finish.

I loved this story, very well written. It got me to relate to Jamie(I actually imagined I was him *laughs*). If you ever find the time, I'd loev to read another of your stories. :)

 Exceedingly well written tale. Amanda is an acomplished writer; and I only wished she might have expanded her story.  Well done Amanda.  I will be looking for more.
                                  Hugs,
                                  Julie

Damn good story!
coulg happen, it is a fact that 1 of the x cromasomes is allways
inactive in all female cells.
It gives a hook shaped apenadge hanging off the nuceras of the cell
which is how sex tests are done.
MORE PLEASE!!!

Terrific story for your one and only post to this site. I found a few mispelled words but other than that I thought it was a great story told by a wonderfull writer.

I hope you get the chance to favor us with another story. I know it's easier said than done to write something like this, but do us the favor and let us all have the opportunity to read another of your works.

I think alot of readers enjoy your writing style although few will take the time to leave a comment. Don't let the fact that people don't send in reader comments. Please continue with your skills.

Amanda, I just finished reading your story based upon the recommendation from the Armchair Review.  It is a great story and besides the cause for the change, the reaction and acceptance by those around Jamie is totally believable as I am experiencing that same type of acceptance from family, friends, and clients.  Unless you are working on your next story, I say you need to get busy and start writing again as you possess a talent for story-telling.  By the way, your story 'almost' made me long for Ohio as it is very similar to Michigan, but better sense prevailed as I love The South!

I loved your story.  Very well written

Wow, what a great story! Nice and clean with out all the perverse stuff so many others seem to rely on. Thanks and do write another!